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Alas I Cannot Forget

It was a teacup of pleasure, our brief encounter, just a flight to Brazil. We talked, we laughed, ate, and had a nap. Then, we experienced a series of air pockets. Afraid she turned on me, hugging me tight. I felt her lips hot on my cheeks., till all was calm Her head slid onto my shoulders as she slept, I smelled a trace of faint, expensive perfume. Afterwards, she left the plane and disappeared. A microsecond in this infinite universe, never to be forgotten, and on occasions least expected. Her madonna face haunted me, beckoning, luring, attractive, sensual. It was a secret I held dear, Though I knew not her name. Perhaps that's just my regret, knowing that now she’s in the arms of someone else’s. Does he love her as I did in those few precious moments when we shared each other, and got lost in our peak sensations of tenderness and dreams? I asked myself and wondered but received no reply.

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Date: 10/29/2024 4:42:00 AM
A very heartfelt poem, beautifully written, Victor.
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Date: 10/5/2024 8:10:00 AM
A wonderfully romantic poem, Victor. Reminds me of the sweet young man who was my temporary fiance until I let him go in many years past. Very moving poem you've penned here. Blessings to you.
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Date: 9/29/2024 11:37:00 AM
Well written. Powerful moments :)
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Date: 9/29/2024 10:59:00 AM
- Many times we think ... what if ? ... a wonderful poem as always, my friend :) - hugs
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Date: 9/29/2024 4:21:00 AM
A very vivid creative imagination dear poet Victor - instant love in the air, but did not reach terra firma. Wonderfully creative Blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 9/28/2024 11:50:00 PM
What a moving and touching poem so well woven and delivered! The emotions flowing within your lines truly stood out for me as always! I think many must have been through similar situations. This line really resonates with “ Does he love her as I did” and the ending is soul hitting! Poignant write! Pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light always
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Date: 9/28/2024 12:57:00 PM
A fleeting moment in time that you write about with vividness, recalling it as if it happened just yesterday. Some memories and "ifs" will linger for a lifetime. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 9/28/2024 3:00:00 AM
Such an endearing poem, Victor, we share time with people and they become a part of our life:)
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Date: 9/27/2024 4:32:00 PM
A beautiful poem...never taking moments for granted, but they make us wonder sometimes....
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Date: 9/27/2024 3:11:00 AM
Yep. One never knows what could have been...was it chance, fate missed? None the less, a fond and treasured memory. Well said, Victor.
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Date: 9/27/2024 1:04:00 AM
You always write such beautiful poetry!
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Date: 9/26/2024 4:31:00 PM
Something like this stays with a person . Very nice, Victor
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Date: 9/26/2024 1:22:00 PM
Creative one. Now I am wondering if imagination or fact. Romantic dreams. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
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Date: 9/26/2024 1:15:00 PM
Brief, unexpected, and memorable! Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 9/26/2024 11:52:00 AM
Victor, your first line says it all " A teacup of pleasure" I just love that and it perfectly sets the tone for this peek into a momentary bliss! So well written!! Happy Thursday!
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Date: 9/26/2024 11:44:00 AM
A wonderful poem explores the fleeting nature of a romantic encounter, Victor, captures the intensity of an emotional connection that is both beautiful and ephemeral. It reflects on themes of longing, regret, and the bittersweet nature of memory, as you grapple with the impact of a brief but profound interaction with a stranger.
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Date: 9/25/2024 9:44:00 PM
Your wonderful story of an unforgettable romantic encounter, was well written and a pleasure to read. Blessings. :)
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Date: 9/25/2024 11:04:00 AM
Wonderful write my friend. Hugs
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Date: 9/25/2024 10:40:00 AM
Dear Victor, such a wonderful and romantic travel poem that speaks so much of togetherness and loss. I love reading your heart and it is so full of expression. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 9/25/2024 10:04:00 AM
I loved reading your wonderful write/story. What a great ending. Great memories are the best kind to have. Travel can bring many new people into one's life. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.............
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Date: 9/25/2024 7:04:00 AM
Quite an experience you had Victor, but it wasn't to be, turbulence can be frightening but it's common when flying. Tom
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Date: 9/25/2024 6:36:00 AM
Well you had me till Madonna, though perhaps you meant other than the pop star, a real turn off for me. But the poem itself is cool. A brief moment in time, captured, never forgotten.
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Date: 9/25/2024 6:18:00 AM
moments to be keep preciously in your heart, she was a marvelous person i think, i made some flights in Brazil and have good memories too ( not like yours), this is well written and "rare" ( french sense)
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Date: 9/25/2024 1:36:00 AM
One never forgets precious moments, a wonderful write Victor, though I guess it’s fictional, it’s beautiful… Beryl
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