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Premiere Contest WinnerAlabaster Dawn Whisper

Written: October 23, 2025, for contest sponsored by: Hilo Poet ***************** Under the serene alabaster glow of dawn Beneath a vibrant sunset-hued nimbus sky, Fiery souls awaken, Yearning for radiant aureate visions. In a city that clatters as a fractured calliope. Every step a stammer; every breath a trade. Amid the dull ache of an endless struggle. They intertwine cacophony and tumult. Beyond the silent torment of dark corridors. In lands where ideas don the garb of trade. And hope is a fracture in the pane. The horizon, a split hymn, hides its forms. Decked on a worn sheet of souvenir, They are the exhausted trekkers. The hungry architects of hunger, below neon hieroglyphs broodingly that promised cure but offers pabulum. Still, they resile— in ductile dignity, with the persistence of concrete weeds. The city is a chimera. A miraculous mirage of merit and mirth, where the fulgent meets the forlorn, offering support structures for survival. It serves as both aegis and nemesis, a serene serpentine that whispers in sesquipedalian puzzles. Still in the penumbra of its beat, some holiness remains— A child laughs, bouncing off the brick. A stranger's hand brushes in the subway. A mural arises upon a crumbling facade. These are the hallowed. The ceaseless—. These are soft murmurs of the soul. That which the city cannot remove. They set out on their journey— Not in the quest for fame. But everlasting beauty eludes us all. Routinely dedicated to the same rules.
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Guptar Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 5:59 AM
Heartiest congratulations , poet friend, on your top win in this contest with another of your masterpiece, with an elevated diction, a flowing rhythm and profundity of thoughts. Your poems are unmatchable eye-openers and a source of inspiration. Wishing you the blessings of light.
George Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 7:30 PM
"In a city that clatters as a fractured calliope. Every step a stammer; every breath a trade. Amid the dull ache of an endless struggle." How aptly you have described a city.... with its trade and endless struggle. Dear friend, you have scripted another masterpiece with great poetic adroitness using choicest words rarely used by a commoner. I feel proud to have shared the podium with you. Hearty Congratulations on your trophy win.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 11:55 AM
Your whisper was a whopper, another masterpiece, my friend, Aloha.
Poet Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 12:18 PM
Thank you so much for the wonderful contest subject and for my outstanding trophy.
Jones Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 11:51 AM
Congratulations on your masterpiece's top trophy win dear Sotto!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 24, 2025 at 5:31 PM
a compelling read, dear Sotto...beautifully written. You touched on so many themes, leaving me breathless. I liked so many of the lines but especially liked: These are soft murmurs of the soul. That which the city cannot remove.
Rolland Avatar
October 24, 2025 at 3:50 AM
wonderful poem, the message and images are touching and moving the soul, great reading , enjoyed
Hind Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 6:37 PM
This is so breathtaking, each line grabs the soul- for it's been there, is there.
Rose  Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 6:30 PM
The city hold great beauty Sotto, but quiet often we cannot see it for we are wrapped in our little world of pain and illusion. Thanks for the amazing write, a Fav for me
Alhemaidy Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 2:45 PM
I love countryside simplicity & easiness :-) Very nice write!
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