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At the Edge of my Tears I could weave monuments with words (But why shall I say much NOW?) The Hindu child within my soul Adored weaving flower-circles of honor (And I wove many for thee, Friend) Jim, I know my ancestors will surrender all Their bouquets, their marigolds, proteas - though we - You and I, are forever in Jesus' lineage, NOW

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Date: 1/1/2020 5:14:00 AM
This is lovely and touching, Anil. Lucky are those who believe that that moving on is the beginning not the end. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 1/1/2020 5:37:00 AM
Thank you kindly Paul; he was the one who first called me, "mensch" we were poetry conveners etc., in Greenbelt, Maryland. WE also wrote the GNR: Greenbelt News Review, and among the humblest of erudite men/humans, was Jim. shalom, shalom and happiest of New years Paul. H O P E
Date: 12/31/2019 4:46:00 PM
Blessings, as we grieve and celebrate ... 2020 is here, and we do both often. Yes, in some of our .grieving there is celebration of LIFE lived, and in the celebrations we miss those who have "moved" on. Goodbyes are heart-heavy, and we need God;s help daily, along with friends'. Shalom, shalom siblings.
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Date: 12/30/2019 10:21:00 PM
Well said, brother Anil!
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Date: 12/29/2019 6:38:00 AM
I am more a spiritual than a religious man, but your description of Jesus rocks ...
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Date: 12/28/2019 6:00:00 PM
Very descriptive and moving, Anil. Janice
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