Al-Bahr El-Mayyit

Salinity shores Lapped by waves from the past Heavenly skies grace

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/7/2010 10:07:00 AM

How did I miss this one? A true gem, James! What a terrific image you have given us! Love, Carolyn

Mitch White

Date: 3/30/2010 2:01:00 PM

Very well done James Congrats

John Freeman

Date: 3/30/2010 8:24:00 AM

Beautiful job James, looks just like the picture. Congratulations on your fine display of your awesome talent. Agape, Moses

Margaret Foster

Date: 3/28/2010 8:12:00 PM

The rocks do look salt encrusted. good one James...cheers Margaret ( el Mal Muerto)

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/28/2010 5:40:00 PM

I really liked the unusual title and twist to this poem. Congratulations on your winning poem, James! Unique and well done! ~ Love, Carrie

Date: 3/28/2010 1:18:00 PM

James, I liked this one the first time I read it. Congratulations being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Way to go! Enjoy your success. Karen

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/28/2010 11:44:00 AM

Hi James! My warm congratulations to you on your win! Thanks for leaving your kind comments for me, also...Is that a Scottish language -the title? Hope you and family having a good day! Peace, love, Audrey

Marty Owens

Date: 3/28/2010 11:26:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku...congratulations on your win in the contest...Marty

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 3/28/2010 8:54:00 AM

A very nice Haiku. Congratulations on placing in the contest. Caryl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/28/2010 7:09:00 AM

Big congrats James on your HM in the champagne Skies contest.. a wonderful Haiku full of vivid description and a well earned and deserved trip to the winners circle ..see u there..luv.. "Sweetheart"