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al-Bahr El-Mayyit

Salinity shores Lapped by waves from the past Heavenly skies grace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/7/2010 10:07:00 AM
How did I miss this one? A true gem, James! What a terrific image you have given us! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/30/2010 2:01:00 PM
Very well done James Congrats
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Date: 3/30/2010 8:24:00 AM
Beautiful job James, looks just like the picture. Congratulations on your fine display of your awesome talent. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/28/2010 8:12:00 PM
The rocks do look salt encrusted. good one James...cheers Margaret ( el Mal Muerto)
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Date: 3/28/2010 5:40:00 PM
I really liked the unusual title and twist to this poem. Congratulations on your winning poem, James! Unique and well done! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 3/28/2010 11:44:00 AM
Hi James! My warm congratulations to you on your win! Thanks for leaving your kind comments for me, also...Is that a Scottish language -the title? Hope you and family having a good day! Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 3/28/2010 11:26:00 AM
Beautiful Haiku...congratulations on your win in the contest...Marty
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Date: 3/28/2010 8:54:00 AM
A very nice Haiku. Congratulations on placing in the contest. Caryl
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Date: 3/28/2010 7:09:00 AM
Big congrats James on your HM in the champagne Skies contest.. a wonderful Haiku full of vivid description and a well earned and deserved trip to the winners circle ..see u there..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/28/2010 5:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's Champagne Skies Contest James. Love Carol
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Date: 3/28/2010 4:21:00 AM
Congratulations! on your winning this contest, James. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 3/28/2010 1:07:00 AM
James, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul
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Date: 3/26/2010 10:46:00 AM
Really nice, James. Geee, I need to go see that picture! LUv, andrea
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Date: 3/25/2010 7:03:00 PM
James~ Very nicely done Haiku good luck in the contest! Laura :)
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Date: 3/25/2010 5:15:00 PM
nicely penned, enjoyed
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Date: 3/25/2010 5:11:00 PM
tongues of truth! Light & Love
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Date: 3/25/2010 4:35:00 PM
Nicely done, James... "salinity shores."" that is a perfect description (I wouldn't have come up with anything that great!!)
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