Ajar

even soft footsteps leave an imprint behind this door, ajar with a shadow I once knew caught in its draft

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Wilma Neels

Date: 4/6/2015 2:12:00 PM

Awesome Tanka Michael ;) congratulations on your win as well

Michael Dom
Date: 5/3/2015 8:40:00 AM

Hey Wilma - I'm on a late bus here, thanks for stopping at my poem. Cheers!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/29/2015 10:14:00 PM

MICHAEL, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA

Paul Callus

Date: 3/24/2015 12:38:00 PM

Hi Michael! This is one of the very best entries that I have read; very unique in thought and presentation. #7 Congrats on your fine win...very deserved. // paul

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/23/2015 9:58:00 PM

Michael, congrats on your win with the wonderful Tanka!

Michael Dom
Date: 3/24/2015 12:35:00 PM

Thanks Kim @}~

Constance La France

Date: 3/23/2015 6:28:00 PM

Michael, I love this poem and the layout is awesome, congratulations on your fine win with this outstanding write, a perfect 7

Michael Dom
Date: 3/24/2015 12:34:00 PM

Your words lift my wings. Honored.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/22/2015 1:53:00 PM

Michael, Congratulations on your awesome TANKA 2 win Always & Forever <3 Luv ~LINDA~

Michael Dom
Date: 3/24/2015 12:31:00 PM

PD - always @}~

Kim Shaw

Date: 3/22/2015 12:04:00 PM

Congrats on your top win, Michael! Hugs, Kimberly

Michael Dom
Date: 3/24/2015 12:29:00 PM

Big :-) @}~

John Lawless

Date: 3/22/2015 7:03:00 AM

Michael, the first two lines read like an inspirational slogan. I have had many instances of people moving softy in my life, leaving only the shadow of their influence. Magnificent write, well deserved win.

Michael Dom
Date: 3/24/2015 12:27:00 PM

John, thank you for your wonderful comment.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/21/2015 9:02:00 PM

this one is so mysterious, and the way you presented it, just made me want to place it high. It seems nostalgic to me and I am a sucker for that! Congrats in my contest.

Michael Dom
Date: 3/24/2015 12:25:00 PM

Andrea, oh wow GLORY! Cheers and thanks.