Aircraft of Love


I’m a Skilled Aviator
Flying an Aircraft of Love.
I Lost the Flight Control,
But Survived the Crash Somehow.

I Lost my License
To Fly again.
I never knew that Memories
Can Cause such Severe Turbulence.

I keep Looking Up at the Sky
Wondering if it still Remembers Me.
I keep Staring at the Passing Clouds
They never even bother to Look down.

Sometimes, I think
I Shouldn’t have Lost Control.
But Sometimes, I think
I Shouldn’t have Survived the Crash.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Jenkins Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 7:51 PM
Liked it should have ended it with should have ducked and rolled. Seems to make more sense cause your a survivor.
Vidheya Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 9:39 PM
Makes Sense. Thank You. :)
Adona Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 11:44 PM
Such a wonderful piece!!!
Vidheya Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 12:13 AM
Thank You. :)
Kavanaugh Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 1:30 PM
Soar on skilled aviator. Thank you.
Vidheya Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 12:13 AM
Thank You. :)
White Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 3:39 AM
I like your metaphor: aviator of love, well wtitten poem. I only have the question, why do you capitalize so many first letters of words? Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
Vidheya Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 4:00 AM
Thank You Mr Darren. I Capitalize to draw more Attention to certain Words from the Reader. :)
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