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Air within the bubble

When I am around you The good things feel bad, And the bad things feel awful But I feel drawn, To you Your power, your hold And I can breathe Inside this bubble I am teetering on the edge Completely unstable The bubble is a 2way mirror When inside I can see no way out No pain outside, just the reflection of my own image staring back. When looking from outside in, I can see right through. The pain, troubles and heartache within. Realisation. Is it better to see the truth or not feel the pain?!!!

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Date: 2/12/2024 2:40:00 AM
A good poem. Well done.
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