Air Thread

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room has no windows air is already moving photo hung by thread

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David Kavanagh

Date: 4/24/2021 11:57:00 AM

Heya Lasaad, sometimes I look out the window, and want to cover it back up, your wonderful thought provoking collage haiku, is giving me ideas, cheers David

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/24/2021 1:09:00 PM

That's a brilliant idea; at least you had the great honor to detect some Haiku secret:) My friend, sometimes there is a microscopic layer between us and the big solution we need to find and reveal, Cheers Lasaad

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/24/2021 2:30:00 AM

Loved your haiku.

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/24/2021 1:10:00 PM

Thanks, Victor, likewise i love all your poems

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/23/2021 6:43:00 PM

Hi Lasaad, Nice picture and good write. Your verse causes one to think:-)Alexis

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/23/2021 6:49:00 PM

Thanks Alexis for the sweet words, actually the Haiku purpose is to cause our brain to work a bit, in this case, it’s easy : the picture is hiding the window Have a great week end