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Air, Fire, Water - Personification of the Elements Poetry Contest

Air whispered wish with its all might to rouse fire to groom so bright; Fire has all the heat to give, but, without air, fire can't live. The fuel comes like unfolded maze, like love comes from unforeseen place; Heat, fuel, air make fire to glow to warm the hearts as cold as snow. With the spark of its sweet ember- precious moments to remember, the nights when lovers make their pray to love forever, come to stay. When heat of fire comes full rage, the water rips its thorny cage; Fire kneels in full submission, water tames its wild volition. 1st place Judged: September 24, 2023

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Date: 9/23/2023 10:11:00 PM
This is so nicely done, Roger. Congratulations on your top win.
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 9/24/2023 3:04:00 PM
Thank you very much...
Date: 9/23/2023 6:54:00 PM
First of all great job with rhyming and great use of personal relationship words. You have captured the relationship aspect well with this. Congratulations on you win in my contest.
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 9/23/2023 11:50:00 PM
Thank you very much...

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