Air Balloon

Nature’s flower bed....
Gondolas where falcons tread 
Fire burst overhead















For S K A T's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 4:04 AM
Congratulations Robb on your win in SKAT*'s contest "Air Balloon Ride". Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 11:03 PM
Congratulations Robb on your well deserved win in this Haiku contest!
A   Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 5:53 PM
Robb,, Congratulations in the contest. enjoyed,..p.d.
Fraser Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 12:11 PM
Many congratulations Robb on your win in Skat's fine contest....:)
Kendrick Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 9:34 AM
Enjoyed the imagination used with this win..Sara
Mehta Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 7:41 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Skat, Robb
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 7:19 AM
Really nice haiku, a great ending line! Congratulations, Robb. Luv, Andrea
Neels Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 3:18 AM
What a stunning haiku Robb! Congratulations to you ;-)
Sweetheart Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 11:46 PM
Congrats Robb on your super success in the hot air balloon contest with this magical ride ... enjoy a big win with luv..
A  Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 10:15 PM
ROBB A KOPP,, CONGRATULATIONS!! ON YOUE WONDERFUL HOT AIR-BALLOON RIDE. HAD LOTS OF FUN READING EVERY ENTRY. THANK YOU~SKAT
Mehta Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 2:38 PM
Very creative and innovative write on the air balloon, Robb
Ruebel Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 2:32 PM
Hello Robb, I am so glad I chose you to read this afternoon. This is so well done Good luck in the contest As Always, Shar
Roberts Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 2:12 PM
lovely haiku, good luck in the contest
La France Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 1:56 PM
Very nice Robb, "where falcons tread" I love that.. best of luck in the contest
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