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Like water, we are consistently in portability. We've generally been headed for our fate to fulfill Achieving understanding, information, and empathy At the point when we recover our habit of life-thrill. ? After a phony gloat, air and water rose to claim. Garbled, yet with the tone, It's trivial chatter. "I'm focusing on all," the water said I'm fame. I'm here for living creatures, and I assist them to foster. I douse the flames that had injured a lot of people. I supply goods across seas as if I were land and sky. As a result, the air surged up and said, "I am the air." Each species was created as a result of my supply. Yearning makes hearts alive, so there is stillness. I pushed the slag of the wind blew, ebbing the way. All water offers benefits that may yield our bliss. There is no air apart from god will; for him, we pray. I can envision the tangle of a sluggish ocean. The water fiercely snaps and swerves. The same as ideas were bouncing around in my brain. I'm pulled back by the wind, unable to alter steps. The waves are hostile as they lash toward the cove. Blowing a fog aped a heave of cold air breathed out. Our identity is gone; our life is a wizardry rove. The brain is utterly throwing around with wave shout. Times consistent ascent and fall, unending drops of sorrow. Many intend the need to show a wish paddler profundity. Significantly nearly ruin, a caring touch made all the bestow. The water has the sparkle of soul and God's trustability.
Written: June 15, 2021 All Yours (Jun 27) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 6/16/2021 10:31:00 PM
Unable to perceive the shape of you, I find you all around me. Your presence fills my eyes with your love. It humbles my heart, for you are everywhere...... Found this wonderful qoute in net. Very profound. Thanks
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Date: 6/16/2021 7:06:00 PM
WoW! Lasaad, What a profound take on the contest theme. Best wishes in the contest. Well done:-)Alexis
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Date: 6/16/2021 11:36:00 AM
Surprisingly I wrote something similar, although in my own style! All the best for contest
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Date: 6/16/2021 1:06:00 PM
Hi, Rama. It would be an honor if we had the same tautology conception, which is a mystery. I didn't have a chance to read yours since I was on a short trip, but I'm going to read it and see if there are any commonalities. Thank you for your time and consideration in leaving a comment. Warm hugs and best wishes.
Date: 6/16/2021 4:51:00 AM
Much to think about here, Lasaad--a blend of life and nature in great imagery.
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Date: 6/16/2021 4:47:00 AM
Outstanding imagery, sublime messages, profound verses, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Good to see you back! Blessings.
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Date: 6/15/2021 10:07:00 PM
Great description of water as it hits the sea or the jetty. Best for a win. Great poetry.
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Date: 6/15/2021 7:15:00 PM
Very intriguing, Lasaad. The images are stark, but engaging. So true, "our life is a mystery." Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 6/15/2021 7:54:00 PM
Indeed dear friend Milton, it is intriguing because everything around us is a real mystery when we look into space and see the high and low tide. When we know the volume of water and how the earth is searching for water. And when we see our water origin and how humans are greedy towards their creator, all those deep questions and many more are sometimes mind-blowing. Appreciate your feedback and beautiful words. Have a wonderful evening, peace and love

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