Air, Aligned

I wonder how many times a day
Our breathing patterns coincide,
As if my source of life, and yours,
Conspired to keep us both alive.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Meyer Avatar
July 24, 2012 at 3:37 AM
Very beautiful Annie, sometimes very few words are needed to create such an emotional stirring thought! Peace x Ruby
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July 17, 2012 at 8:24 AM
Annie - This is an incredible notion written in your artful style. Kathy
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July 16, 2012 at 12:30 PM
and a super title too! :)
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July 16, 2012 at 12:28 PM
Wonderful... your faultless cadence and off-rhyming are sublime. A unique take on the symbiosis of a lasting relationship.
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