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Ain'T That Some Shit

6/27/17 No longer dreaming Just proceeding Without cheating I am achieving More than I ever was believing Every single evening Now my impressions are leaving Even more meaning To other human beings While I am still breathing It's time to make this year better Despite all the weird weather My dome vexed I felt my bones flex Across stone steps After being shown less Before pushing past the home stretch With all chromosomes left I then took over the throne next And any other opposition with cloned flesh Nearby a crows nest Now ain't that some **** As they like to say payback's a ***** The light from the sun shines Amid the pines Where there was an abandoned mine For a long time The only hound stood But how could It sound good All around the hood When I doubt it would It didn't matter if it ever would place in a chart Because it was straight from the heart Even when the day was dark Across the bay and park Beside all the waves and sharks The flu hit And the air was too thick But I put out some even more true **** Because the shoe fit And it was the best way to do it With very few tricks While talking to some new chicks A ship that got stopped atop the rocks sank While there was an ever increasing fog bank Some continued to give god thanks While the size of several bogs shrank I was feeling like I was in quite an odd place If I never had it, then how could I ever have lost faith? Vehicles at different rates going zero to sixty Some of which go beyond one hundred and fifty During winter smoke coming out the chimney In the country and city People walking their dogs and playing in the park with a Frisbee Carbonation making it all fizzy Spinning, all about now feeling dizzy Areas spotless or really filthy Objects and animals, tall average or mini In the end the crime scene was grisly

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Date: 7/22/2017 5:15:00 PM
Hhmmm...Jury is still out on this one, Dalton, me old shoe; cannot decide whether it should get the Pulitzer or the bin - Damned compulsive reading though! To hell with it, Dalton - It's the Pulitzer!! A thumbs up from me - great read! My best regards. :) john
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Dalton Ogletree
Date: 7/26/2017 3:07:00 PM
Thanks for your honesty and perspective John! I appreciate your comment :) My best regards to you too!

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