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Ain'T Retirement Grand

I wake up at 5:30 most mornings Before the sun has a chance to rise Head for the bathroom as fast as I can To get rid of yesterday's Mai Tai I let out a great big sigh of relief As I wipe the gunk from my peepers Stand in front of a full length mirror Like Tarzan, in my trap door sleepers I sure am ruggedly handsome, methinks Could even grace the cover of GQ That's if they publish a special edition For overweight, balding yahoos Maybe I'm being too hard on myself I've still got a surprise up my sleeve Like running a mile in two hours flat Quite a feat for old guys to achieve Now here's a lesson, so listen up good To this fatherly advice that I share Take care of yourself or you'll wind up As a old guy without any hair ©Jack Ellison 2012

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Date: 8/20/2016 4:45:00 PM
Silly one, Jack. You've still got a young and beautiful heart and soul, that's for certain. Keep up the amazing work. Always, Laura
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/22/2016 7:44:00 AM
That's me... SILLY! Is there any other way to be??? LOL Love and hugs, Jack xxx
Date: 4/21/2016 8:05:00 AM
Peepers? Tarzan? Great work!
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Date: 4/21/2016 8:10:00 AM
Would you like me to send you a picture??? Hmmm, perhaps not!!!!
Date: 8/30/2012 5:38:00 PM
Hey Jack, you are surely hard on your self. I am a bit younger than yolu and I am sure I can't even run a mile without stopping...well maybe, lol. seems you've been taking care of yourself. Nice write. One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 8/30/2012 6:05:00 PM
Just having some fun, my friend! LOL On a mission since the beginning of June! As of this morning, have lost 23.6 pounds! Yee haw! Won't be running any marathons yet though... love and hugs, Jack

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