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Aimless

Empty room, scattered thoughts, roam, dark wilderness. Sorrow reins, uneasy mind, do question, of grand design. Chart a course in sea's of vagueness, a fate still undefined. Clouded future, lost clarity, the path, uncertainty. Wander fields, a barren landscape, murky waters of distant plans, confounding the providence, my destiny curtailed.

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Date: 12/26/2023 11:26:00 AM
I can relate to this poem a lot. I have experienced this and you wrote about it so well. I know that lost feeling of lack of clarity with things in life. Keep up the great writing! :)
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Mark Hughes
Date: 12/27/2023 7:04:00 AM
Thank you Heidi for your kindness!

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