Aimless

Empty room, scattered thoughts,
roam, dark wilderness.
Sorrow reins, uneasy mind,
do question, of grand design.

Chart a course in sea's of vagueness,
a fate still undefined.
Clouded future, lost clarity,
the path, uncertainty.

Wander fields, a barren landscape,
murky waters of distant plans,
confounding the providence,
my destiny curtailed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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December 26, 2023 at 11:26 AM
I can relate to this poem a lot. I have experienced this and you wrote about it so well. I know that lost feeling of lack of clarity with things in life. Keep up the great writing! :)
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December 27, 2023 at 7:04 AM
Thank you Heidi for your kindness!
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