Aim To Prevail

AIM to PREVAIL Soar like the eagle, swim like a whale. Stand strong as "The Liberty": aim to prevail! _______________________________________________________ 12:23 pm, November 24, 2015
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Makama Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 4:08 AM
lines with curves of wisdom and landscapes of awe! My mind is in a park of joy to how I manage selecting this page. Keep on writing dear poet and as always, a wonderful 7 without a doubt!
Fraser Avatar
November 27, 2015 at 3:59 PM
Speaks volumes does this wise and clever short piece. Belated congrats little one, hugs // James xx~xx
Merryman Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 6:03 PM
Positive and confident! Congrats on your win, Olive! Love, Kim
Tor Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 5:38 AM
Nice win Olive! Congratulations!
A  Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 6:06 PM
Olive, Congratulations on your awesome and sweet Epigram couplet win. Have yourself a wonderful, blessed Thanksgiving Day. Love SKAT
Negron Flores Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 5:23 PM
Congratulations Olive
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 5:10 PM
Words to stand by Olive. Excellent! Congratulations on your win!
Callus Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 12:07 PM
Congratulations Olive_eloi!! ...you too soar like an eagle with this merited win:) Hugs // paul
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 25, 2015 at 6:40 AM
thanks much PAul, I just entered i think near the deadline... :D! hehehe~ Olive Eloisa
Dietrich Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 9:28 AM
Interesting you mention the whale, with Moby Dick coming to theaters soon! well, I am trying to catch up with oodles of comments and just seeing as many short poems as I can since I gotta leave today on my trip. Glad I saw this one Congrats in the contest.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 9:46 PM
I didn't hear yet about Moby DIck Andie.. =`) but I just find the whale a friendlier kind of fish than the shark.. =`) hehehe ~Olive Eloisa =`)
Roper Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 9:22 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Olive!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 9:40 PM
thanks much Eve,, =`)
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 12:24 AM
Excellent, Olive! These are very encouraging words...good luck in the contest. Hugs, Rhonda
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 9:36 PM
thanks much Rhonda for your remarks.. =`)~
Smith Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 10:42 PM
Lovely epigram Olive. I have seen so many good ones. Good luck.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 7:34 AM
Ive seen yours and i like it.. =`)
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