Unseeking Seeker Poet Rhyme Royal

Aim of the game

Eight billion souls mirroring God’s heartbeat,
granted full freedom to act as they please,
estranged from source find love and light deplete,
until shape shifting desires they release,
whence flowing with ease like the morning breeze,
they take a step back to stop flow of time,
dissolving presence in love’s bliss beat chime.

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Sotto Poet August 21, 2026 at 5:30 AM This poem beautifully captures the theme of finding peace and freedom by letting go of worldly desires. The imagery of "eight billion souls" and "love’s bliss beat chime" adds depth to the message. Unseeking Seeker August 21, 2026 at 7:36 AM Thank you, SP dear for your insightful comment. I’m happy the message resonates in your glowing heart.

Alison A Smith nee Howarth August 21, 2026 at 4:31 AM A graceful spiritual rhyme royal that frames life as freedom, separation, and a return to divine presence. I especially like “shape shifting desires” and the closing image of time dissolving into love’s “bliss beat chime.” Unseeking Seeker August 21, 2026 at 4:50 AM Happy you enjoyed, Alison, thank you for dropping by.

I Am Anaya August 20, 2026 at 11:45 PM Very well said, we slow & flow, muy lento, U.S. Beautiful royal rhyme👏🌸 Unseeking Seeker August 21, 2026 at 1:58 AM Thank you, Anaya dear, delighted you enjoyed this one 😊