Randy Steele Poet Haiku

Ahh Choo Haiku

Dark skies prevailing
Rain puddles icing over
Jack Frost clamping down

Sweaters change to coats
Canopies falling like snow 
Crystals flake windshields

Arctic winds howling
Blizzard skating upon us
Prepare to shovel

Mustaches frozen
Watery eyes show the chill
Sore noses galore

August 25, 2016

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Daniel Turner August 25, 2016 at 8:56 PM This is super, Randy. You have definitely captured the change of seasons. Really enjoyed the read. Good luck! Randy Steele August 30, 2016 at 7:49 AM Thanks Daniel. Your comment is a great encouragement.

Lynn Marie August 25, 2016 at 7:45 PM You captured the change of season wonderfully with great word choice and vivid imagery. The last verse really made me smile..so cute :-) A terrific piece, a pleasure to read. My best to you in the contest. blessings, lynn Randy Steele August 30, 2016 at 7:52 AM Thank you, Lynn Marie. I've experienced that last verse many winters in Ohio. Will visit your poems soon. Blessings to you, also.