Ah Margarita

Dark waterfall of soft strands
Playing in the air, loftily....
Dark hollows piercing my heart
White shine-brighter than the sun...
Caricature of the milkiest dye
Rosiest ambrosias, sweet nor'westers....
Angelic face, love supreme
Eve's grace and a hue in cream...
Floating enigma of delight
Captivating perfume of silky nethers....
Encumbering all other damsels
Fairest pearl of the night sky
Outshining the heavens who sculpted her
That is Margarita................
A soul without words
A despair without losses
A bride without the pain
A momentary ray of hope
The sunshine of the day
A melody of mystical times
Margarita is that.............
Masterpiece of my brush
Reflection of my demeanour
Melody of my seasons
That is Margarita...........
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 5:28 PM
Samantak, A belated congrats on your colorful win! I enjoyed your heartfelt expression of color and beauty! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Brown Avatar
July 27, 2012 at 1:40 PM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Paint The World" contest Samantak. Love, Carol
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July 29, 2012 at 2:19 PM
Thank you so much, Carol! :)
Merryman Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 6:51 PM
A lovely, descriptive write, Samantak! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Bhadra Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 2:22 PM
Thank you so much Kim! :)
Guzzi Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 2:45 PM
You make me want to know..who is Margarita? [the moon?] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Bhadra Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 2:28 PM
I tried to bring in different interpretations through the description, one of them being the Moon. :) My primary motivation for wanting to write such a poem was a lady whose beauty captivated me back in the day. :)
Williams Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 4:42 AM
Samantak congrats on your win, vibrantly written..David
Bhadra Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 2:28 PM
Thank you so much David! :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 3:18 AM
Beautiful write, congratulations on your win xx
Bhadra Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 2:29 PM
Thanks Mandy!! :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 11:50 AM
splendid writing. Congrats on your worthy win.
Bhadra Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 2:29 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea! :)
Brown Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 8:42 AM
Congratulations on your super well deserved win in Craig's "Sweet" contest Samantak. Love, Carol
Bhadra Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 9:09 AM
Thank you so much, Carol! :)
Macfarlane Avatar
July 15, 2012 at 7:42 PM
Awesome descriptive write....congrats on your win! Hugs
Bhadra Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 12:35 AM
Thank you so much Cecilia! :)
Poet Avatar
July 15, 2012 at 5:25 PM
Daruun!!!Congrats!!
Bhadra Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 12:35 AM
Thanks Kash :)
Grisetti Avatar
July 15, 2012 at 1:41 PM
congratulations on your winning poem.
Bhadra Avatar
July 15, 2012 at 2:13 PM
Thank you Joann!! :)
Williams Avatar
July 15, 2012 at 1:12 PM
Samantak, congrats on your great win, David
Bhadra Avatar
July 15, 2012 at 2:12 PM
Thanks David :)
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