Ah

aaahhh
such a breath is taken to make that sound exquisite
ooohhh
and then a release of air so you could relinquish in it
mmmm
may I take a sip again from your delicious mouth
sshhhh
let me breath you in and you could breath me out
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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August 1, 2010 at 4:13 AM
makes me feel like taking deep breaths lol,, cool write, enjoyed..P.D.
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July 31, 2010 at 5:00 AM
This is such a captivating poem, capturing your imagination and cretivity. Well done.
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