Agoraphobia

Here I sit inside my box to the assembly line of the Boring Masses
Here I sit inside my box dreaming…
enjoying…
dreams that I can’t explain.
Dreams of color and music
Dreams of wine and dance
Dreams of song and joy
They can’t get me here
I feel warmth and safe inside my box.
They can’t make me feel in this fortress of individuality.
Outside I hear a constant rhythm of moans of pain.
Why would I want to be like them?
So, I sit inside my box waiting, dreaming , wondering and fearing
The rhythm is getting closer
louder.
Louder.
Louder!
So, I sit inside my box fearing, anticipating.
I feel cold and scared inside my box.
Scared of them
Here I sit inside my box fearing my insertion to the assembly line of the Boring Masses

By Robb A. Kopp
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Fraser Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 12:47 PM
Many congratulation's Robb on your win in Carloyn's "March Madness" contest with this splendid poem....:)
Mannan Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 5:21 AM
Heartiest congrats for this victory.
Johnson Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 3:42 PM
This fear is very real in some. I understand that and sympathize. Congratulations on your well earned win. Love, Joyce
Taylor Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 2:49 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Robb. Nice going. Ralph
Mehta Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 2:14 PM
Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of Carolyn, Robb
Brown Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 12:12 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Carolyn's "March Madness" contest Robb. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 11:35 AM
`Tis great to see you in the top five Robb with this worthy fifth place honor. Congratulations on your poem's honor. Agape, Moses
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March 8, 2011 at 7:34 AM
It's sad that so many people suffer from agoraphobia, Robb. But when they start to feel frightened inside their own boses, the stres must be incredible. Like the way you express fear of succumbing to the "boring masses." Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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March 2, 2011 at 7:51 PM
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March 2, 2011 at 7:48 PM
Unique and very well done, Robb! Thanks for entering it in the contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
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January 24, 2010 at 11:33 AM
powerful write and insightful, congratualtions on being featured
Haick Avatar
January 21, 2010 at 9:34 AM
Great introspective write, Robb! Congratulations on your poem being featured this week on the Soup and thank you also for reading and leaving your kind comments on my poem! Peace, Audrey
Fisher Avatar
January 20, 2010 at 11:58 AM
Many congrats on your featured poem this week. Rgds Janette
Adeite Avatar
January 19, 2010 at 8:49 PM
This is a wonderful piece , congrats on your well deserved feature. keep writing, you are such a wonderful poet. Your poetry friend Adeleke
Fraser Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 12:58 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
Smith Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 6:25 AM
i am agoraphobic, good write.
Brown Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 4:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Robb. I hope you have many more. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
January 11, 2010 at 5:15 PM
Eccentric people are much more interesting! Light & Love
Shango Avatar
January 4, 2010 at 3:25 PM
Once the mass is present its okay ... the box is filling all living space ... nothing to fear now, except the hunger of the mass for your poems. Welcome to poetry soup, your sublime gift shakes the tree of love; I am honored to read to work as a friend. Right on!
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January 4, 2010 at 2:23 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. may your stay be a long one and your new year filled with blessings.. luv.. creativeness.. friendships.. health... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your poetry tonight..
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January 4, 2010 at 7:58 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Robb. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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January 3, 2010 at 12:05 PM
A phobia I am all to familiar with, nice work...Raul
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