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This was pain like none I'd had before from ground up felt like I had been impaled I leaned unsteadily against the door fists tightly clenched, through gritted teeth inhaled. The need to cry out was hard to suppress in silence, cursed all things from earth to sky until at last the agony grew less and fiery tempered thoughts had passed me by. It will happen again, yes, this I know, on bedroom radiator stub my toe.

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Date: 11/13/2017 10:46:00 PM
I love the contrast between intensity and humor in it. A fantastic poem, Viv.
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Date: 10/31/2017 6:44:00 PM
For a second I was worried about your old ticker. Phew!!
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Date: 10/29/2017 11:11:00 AM
LOL, Loved how you ended this, this was toe much!!
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Date: 10/29/2017 7:17:00 AM
OUCH, it is excruciatingly painful Mr Viv!!! Great humour through the pain:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/29/2017 5:26:00 AM
That end...lol!!!! My Aunt once had my great-grandma’s full-size, heavy standing ashtray in her house. I ran to answer the phone (before the cell) and &*$#!!!
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