Agony

This was pain like none I'd had before
from ground up felt like I had been impaled
I leaned unsteadily against the door
fists tightly clenched, through gritted teeth inhaled.
The need to cry out was hard to suppress
in silence, cursed all things from earth to sky
until at last the agony grew less
and fiery tempered thoughts had passed me by.
It will happen again, yes, this I know,
on bedroom radiator stub my toe.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Nusker Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 10:46 PM
I love the contrast between intensity and humor in it. A fantastic poem, Viv.
Murray Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 6:44 PM
For a second I was worried about your old ticker. Phew!!
Vaso Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 11:11 AM
LOL, Loved how you ended this, this was toe much!!
Allison Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 7:17 AM
OUCH, it is excruciatingly painful Mr Viv!!! Great humour through the pain:-) hugs jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 5:26 AM
That end...lol!!!! My Aunt once had my great-grandma’s full-size, heavy standing ashtray in her house. I ran to answer the phone (before the cell) and &*$#!!!
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