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Aglow

You may missed it, but you are
incandescently alive; a shooting star
at dusk-colored sky. Falling

into the atmosphere, first contact of
fresh air. Friction
wears you armor in blazing flame, highlight—
In the star-sown space, you
a knight descending into this earth
on your loyal mount that is
you, and stardust from unnamed planets
that you once drifted among
aimlessly—until inevitably gravity
from this earth hooked 
you. Out of all lost asteroids—
You

Into this earth 
you fall, this earth you soar—in a sky shared 
with this new species called doves, you
fly your own sky, draw
a tail of wonderstruck dusts 
On trails no comets share, tremble—fear—
but keep chasing, by dint of
the white-hot oxygen that
ignites heartbeat at risk of explosion—

Know: in your motherland they speak
the tale of a young star
claiming his spark in new air.

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Date: 8/20/2025 4:46:00 AM
Ahh the essence of being and the individualistic arc each pursues. Good to read you this morning Jaz. Always a pleasure
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Jasmine Tsai
Date: 8/20/2025 4:55:00 AM
Thanks, Tom! It's always a pleasure to read your work as well :)

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