Aging , Not So Gracefully

Once my legs were shapely
and my knees, they didn't creak.
Once my bones were resilient and strong.
But now they're brittle and weak.

Exercise is in the past now,
I'm winded walking to the door.
The days of all day adventures,
well those days, they are no more.

Getting old is just the pits
in, oh so many ways 
and nothing new is happening 
in my current day to days.

I have to plan two days ahead
just to get the shopping done.
With no more little side trips
that used to be such fun.

I'm in  a rut , I know it ,
but I have no motivation.
I'm much too tired these days
to even go on a vacation.

"I need a rest" is my favourite phrase.
I say it all the time.
But I admit , I'm no longer fit.
No longer in my prime.

So this thing aches and that thing's sore.
It's the way life is today.
So for those of you who still can do, 
just get out there and play !





23/02/2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 8/31/2022 7:58:00 PM
Cleverly written Francine. I certainly can relate. I am afraid my get-up-and-go, got up and went long ago. I enjoyed your poem.
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Francine Roberts
Date: 8/31/2022 8:05:00 PM
thank you
Date: 6/3/2022 6:56:00 PM
Hi Francine, saw you comment on a poem I wrote in 2010...thought I'd stop by say hi, have a cuppa with ya! a lots gone over since then! I'm 66 next wk (flag day) right knee & elbow replaced, left knee needs it, doc says it's lookin' like mashed potatoes 2! don't wanna fall, so I am careful...surgery is tough recovery...friends here are gone also, too many, Daver, Carolyn, many others I miss such sweet comments...hang in there! Love, James
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Francine Roberts
Date: 6/4/2022 9:29:00 AM
ya , knees are shot here too , standing on them on a concrete floor at work is not ideal , so good to hear from you , take care James ,and have a happy birthday next week
Date: 4/23/2022 12:36:00 PM
oh Francine, I feel your pain through the humor here! So I can see you DO post sometimes here still. Good to know. I am still in good physical condition but that stupid Prolia did a horrible number on my nervous system and the only way that I feel comfortable is to be sitting or lying on my bed. Such a shame when I have the ability to be more active!!!
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Date: 2/24/2022 8:11:00 AM
Francine I absolutely love your very relatable poem…..meaningful with humour and great rhyming! I do hope you’re not feeling that bad though? Debx
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Francine Roberts
Date: 2/24/2022 8:33:00 AM
thank you , knee is out and feeling sorry for myself I think , that was the inspiration anyway
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