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An miserable old crone lived down the way Invited young men into her house to play, I can't imagine it, really, It seems to me perfectly silly She wouldn’t give us old men the time of day.
written September 25, 2021

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Date: 9/27/2021 9:41:00 PM
More power to crones I say!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/27/2021 9:52:00 PM
Absolutely!
Date: 9/27/2021 1:49:00 AM
Maybe she was a witch and could miraculously change into a beauty. lol...Delice
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/27/2021 9:31:00 AM
Wow...that's a splendid idea...an idea for a poem, I think. I'm going to wait for you to write it, okay? No, I'm serious. What a fun write it would be.
Date: 9/25/2021 2:18:00 PM
Isn't it usually the other way around??
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/25/2021 2:27:00 PM
I don't know, Nancy. Is it? Let me invite you to write a second limerick stating that point of view. I'll add it.

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