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Aged

Circling ideas of fun Laughing and dancing and some Kissing and touching. Sitting in front of the screen Alone and observing the scene Of others and their lives abundant Isn’t it something? Wrinkles and slowness and few moments of loving the view, Warmth from the river of burning Can’t stifle the swell of my yearning For you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/23/2011 5:10:00 PM
Great poem... I loved the last stanza and love what you tried to capture V well done xx
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Date: 2/22/2011 7:22:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Colleen. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2011 10:06:00 PM
Wonderful after all the years!!
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Date: 2/20/2011 5:49:00 PM
The years have not tarnished the shine of desire. You have written this entry very well.
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Date: 2/20/2011 5:27:00 PM
Creative and expressive write on Aged. Please read my poem The old age not for sissies, Colleen
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