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Aged

Circling ideas of fun
Laughing and dancing and some
Kissing and touching.

Sitting in front of the screen
Alone and observing the scene
Of others and their lives abundant
Isn’t it something?

Wrinkles and slowness and few
moments of loving the view,
Warmth from the river of burning
Can’t stifle the swell of my yearning
For you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/23/2011 5:10:00 PM
Great poem... I loved the last stanza and love what you tried to capture V well done xx
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Date: 2/22/2011 7:22:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Colleen. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2011 10:06:00 PM
Wonderful after all the years!!
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Date: 2/20/2011 5:49:00 PM
The years have not tarnished the shine of desire. You have written this entry very well.
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Date: 2/20/2011 5:27:00 PM
Creative and expressive write on Aged. Please read my poem The old age not for sissies, Colleen
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