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In their sturdy ships the mariners Were guided by the ancient stars. Ensuring that man and beast may feed, Earth nurtures each and every seed. A sea so placid safe and warm Belches up wild demons in a storm. got first place

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Date: 7/30/2010 12:21:00 PM
Nice crystallines, Joyce, congrats on your high place. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/29/2010 10:45:00 AM
Congratulations Joyce for your win in Adeleke Adeite's contest "Sky, Soil, Sea". Love,Carol
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Date: 7/29/2010 10:05:00 AM
congrats on your win with this vivid crystalline
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Date: 7/29/2010 8:32:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on your big win in Adeleke's contest with this awesome write and another wonderful win to do your victory dance for my friend.. with luv..
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Date: 7/29/2010 4:43:00 AM
Congrats on your worthy win in my contest. Thanks for the support and surprise. Please keep your poetry pen alive and keep painting your poetry pad with your passionate pen. Let the creative caps stay! Love, always, Adeleke
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Date: 7/23/2010 9:10:00 AM
All right, you're quickly becoming my favorite poet!
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Date: 7/22/2010 1:39:00 PM
I like the way that you concluded this, as it evokes both blue crystal and excrement green of the sea at different times. Solid job. Thank you, as always. Gerard.
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Date: 7/21/2010 12:12:00 PM
I enjoyed this Joyce, hope you put it in the contest. Bg
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Date: 7/21/2010 12:05:00 PM
enjoyed reading today!!
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