Age of Peace---Andaree

The long gone peace from my Earth ached to be his -
        The black soul to seethe from vampires’ kiss.
              Lives mucked,but,yet to build rage!
                       Almost a closed cage, 
                               In his mind,
                                   Age.
                               Like a kind-
                          Narration of Sage,
                      He reversed diary page!
           Today his keen future seemed to cease,
   The long gone peace from my Earth ached to be his.......
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Inman Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 11:04 PM
I've read all of your posted work before and am surprised to see I left so few comments. I apologize because I enjoy them very much. This Andaree is wonderfully written.
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October 21, 2015 at 9:38 PM
Dew, Wonderful win.................. SKAT
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October 17, 2015 at 9:15 PM
thanks for supporting my contest. Congrats for the HM.
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October 7, 2015 at 4:52 PM
Good luck in the contest Dew!
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October 5, 2015 at 6:03 PM
Dew, this is wonderful for the contest, best of luck ~~
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October 6, 2015 at 2:54 AM
Thank u Broken wings, :)
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