Age Just Don'T Care

Just past some dips along this road
That oak still spreads its dusty leaves,
Arthritic limbs ideal to climb—
As kids, post-school, we’d gather there.

Then, Em was six, four grades behind,
Yet, fear I felt when she climbed high
Or darted quick, that spry gazelle,
Evading tag across the field;

Her kindly nature filled my dreams,
I keenly watched her growing up,
Until my time to ship to war:
Her letters came, pink cursive words.

Well, home I went, a jaded man
‘Til spying Em sprawled on Pine Beach—
She’d sprouted up, those years I missed,
And ripened nice where my eyes longed.

Her glance found mine beneath that sun,
She wondered if I still climb trees;
I wagged my face and felt it burn,
Then asked her to the movie show.

A purple skirt, white blouse she wore,
She clutched my hand through scary scenes.
And when time fell to say good-night,
Upon the porch, her mouth kissed back!

How glad we were to share our time,
My truck, we raced on these back roads
And hid from moonbeams where we necked
Until it dawned our time had come …

Now, years have flooded ‘neath our bridge
But fondly, still, I do recall
Her very words, that honeymoon:
“When Cupid calls, age just don’t care.”




December 15, 2017
Age Doesn’t Matter When You’re In Love Poetry Contest
Julie Leigh Rodeheaver, Sponsor
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Roberts Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 9:53 AM
Sweet sentiments
Teagan Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 10:49 AM
hey, this is a good one for the contest!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 10:31 AM
Very very nice!
Wanter Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 11:32 AM
So dear, I loved it.
Roper Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 9:05 PM
David, congratulations on your awesome win!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 12:47 PM
Sweet pen! Congratulations on your win :)
Bose Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 1:16 PM
Thanks, Maureen. I just kind of heard the voice and it happened. It was fun. Thanks again, Dave
Y. Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 12:27 PM
Hi Dave, It was my pleasure to read this well written story. I feel like this really happened. If not It doesn't matter because you did well with contest theme. Age shouldn't be a factor when you're in love. Congratulations on your high placement. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Bose Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 1:14 PM
Thanks so much, Alexis. I'm sure it really did happen ... but not to me. My wife's only 362 days younger than me, so if I forget her birthday I get zilch 3 days later! This was a joy to write, I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. Thanks again, Dave
Pandit Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 9:19 AM
Dave, your poem is such a pleasure to read--from start to finish. A story of ardent love described in simple but powerful words--very well written!
Bose Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 1:10 PM
Thanks, Vijay. I appreciate your encouragement.
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