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Age Just Don'T Care

Just past some dips along this road That oak still spreads its dusty leaves, Arthritic limbs ideal to climb— As kids, post-school, we’d gather there. Then, Em was six, four grades behind, Yet, fear I felt when she climbed high Or darted quick, that spry gazelle, Evading tag across the field; Her kindly nature filled my dreams, I keenly watched her growing up, Until my time to ship to war: Her letters came, pink cursive words. Well, home I went, a jaded man ‘Til spying Em sprawled on Pine Beach— She’d sprouted up, those years I missed, And ripened nice where my eyes longed. Her glance found mine beneath that sun, She wondered if I still climb trees; I wagged my face and felt it burn, Then asked her to the movie show. A purple skirt, white blouse she wore, She clutched my hand through scary scenes. And when time fell to say good-night, Upon the porch, her mouth kissed back! How glad we were to share our time, My truck, we raced on these back roads And hid from moonbeams where we necked Until it dawned our time had come … Now, years have flooded ‘neath our bridge But fondly, still, I do recall Her very words, that honeymoon: “When Cupid calls, age just don’t care.” December 15, 2017 Age Doesn’t Matter When You’re In Love Poetry Contest Julie Leigh Rodeheaver, Sponsor

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Date: 3/13/2018 9:53:00 AM
Sweet sentiments
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Date: 2/12/2018 10:49:00 AM
hey, this is a good one for the contest!
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Date: 12/22/2017 10:31:00 AM
Very very nice!
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Date: 12/21/2017 11:32:00 AM
So dear, I loved it.
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Date: 12/18/2017 9:05:00 PM
David, congratulations on your awesome win!
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Date: 12/18/2017 12:47:00 PM
Sweet pen! Congratulations on your win :)
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David Bose
Date: 12/18/2017 1:16:00 PM
Thanks, Maureen. I just kind of heard the voice and it happened. It was fun. Thanks again, Dave
Date: 12/18/2017 12:27:00 PM
Hi Dave, It was my pleasure to read this well written story. I feel like this really happened. If not It doesn't matter because you did well with contest theme. Age shouldn't be a factor when you're in love. Congratulations on your high placement. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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David Bose
Date: 12/18/2017 1:14:00 PM
Thanks so much, Alexis. I'm sure it really did happen ... but not to me. My wife's only 362 days younger than me, so if I forget her birthday I get zilch 3 days later! This was a joy to write, I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. Thanks again, Dave
Date: 12/18/2017 9:19:00 AM
Dave, your poem is such a pleasure to read--from start to finish. A story of ardent love described in simple but powerful words--very well written!
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David Bose
Date: 12/18/2017 1:10:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay. I appreciate your encouragement.

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