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Age Gives Grace

In the corner of the well-kept yard An ancient one-car shed stands Its weathered boards and rusty hinges guard Many families' secrets or lives lived bland Though years have etched their stories in sand Now with new owners, a new chapter awaits Its peeling and faded boards whisper of by-gone days After all, some days' sunsets' beauty paints it with updates Those time's gentle hands have lifted and set it ablaze As it ages, it is graced in each phase Some days' morning dew kisses its rugged face Nature's sunrise or sunsets colors it so bright Expose each knot and grain in their special place And there's renewing of its spirit in dawn and twilight At these times, the shed recalls laughter and delight
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Elliott Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 9:04 AM
Hi Sara, a belated and big Congratulations on your recently past POTD. Bravissimo! This is a superior poem on aging. It is very dignified and exquisite. My 68 year old self got out of bed this morning achy all over, one of the aging maladies but getting older is not for the faint of heart. May you and your family have a mellow October weekend. Blessings ~
Kendrick Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 9:35 AM
Regina, As I have heard quoted, getting older is not for sissies. I appreciate the high praise of my work. I am delighted that you found it exquisite. I appreciate the visit and time spent here commenting. Sara K
M  Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 5:03 AM
Beautiful, beautiful nostalgic heart write Sara! Belated Congratulations on POTD! Debx
Kendrick Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 7:12 AM
Why, thank you, Deb. I appreciate the visit and the congrats. Sara K
Rodgers Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 9:57 AM
Dear Sara, Congrats on POTD. I love how you breathed life into something so ordinary and let it carry such quiet wisdom. O' memory, time, and renewal lovingly together gave it a warmth. Such a graceful piece. Autumn Blessings, Sara, Daniel
Kendrick Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 11:02 AM
Ahhh!! Thank you, Daniel for stopping by with congrats and such a nice review of my lines. I appreciate the time spent here. I need all the blessings I can get. Sara K.
George Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 5:13 AM
Your poem is so nostalgic and evokes memories of the bygone times. Though the car shed is withering away and its hinges are rusted and weathered, it looks beautiful in early sunrise and sunset. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD honor, dear Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 11:01 AM
Valsa, your visit with congratulations is encouraging. So are we the oldest generation looking weathered and rusty, but we still have something to offer. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 5:48 PM
Something spectacular about nostalgia! Congrats, Sara, on POTD!
Kendrick Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 3:31 AM
Why, thank you, Kim. I appreciate the time spent here commenting and congrats. Sara K
Baker Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 3:49 PM
Beautifully written poem, Sara. Congratulations on your POTD honor my friend. Enjoy your special day of recognition! Bill
Kendrick Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 5:03 PM
Why, thank you Bill. I appreciate the visit and congratulations given. The nice review was uplifting. Sara K
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 5:29 PM
Hello Sara :-) Congratulations on your very nice p.o.t.d! Have a nice time!
Kendrick Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 4:47 AM
Thanks for congrats and the smile, Abdullah. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K
Nicole Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 4:33 PM
' As it ages, it is graced in each phase. ' So true, my dear friend. Your thoughts hold meaning and depth. Embracing life, days and moments. Congratulations Sara, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Kendrick Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 4:46 AM
Thank you, Brandy, for the nice review of my work and congrats. I appreciate the visit. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 3:54 PM
Wow a really well written Quintain. Congratulations on POTD
Kendrick Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 4:45 AM
Thank you, Andrea for the high praise. Sara K
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September 28, 2025 at 3:33 PM
returning to you, Sara K, to congratulate you on your POTD designation. Applause :-)
Kendrick Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 4:44 AM
So thoughtful of you, Sara B., to return with congrats. Sara K..I appreciate the applause.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 7:52 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your beautiful "Age Gives Grace" write. And it does... Have a blessed day with your win as you go writing away..........
Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 8:48 AM
I appreciate the visit, Paula, and the nice comments about my poem plus the congratulations. Sara K
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September 28, 2025 at 5:35 AM
Sara, a wonderful nostalgic poem. Congratulations on POTD.
Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 6:31 AM
Thank you, Tania. I appreciate the kind review and congrats. Sara K
Cunningham Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 4:56 AM
Time marches on but we make happy memories along the way. Congrats Sara on today's potd honour Tom
Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 6:30 AM
Why, thank you, Tom. So good to see you comment on my poem. Thanks for the congrats. Sara K
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September 28, 2025 at 1:45 AM
- Beautiful to look through life with lovely memories ... and remember that there will be more sunrises and sunsets even though we are "rusty and old" - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Sara ... enjoy :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 4:34 AM
I appreciate the visit and kind review, Anne-Lise. Letting me know that it made POTD is so nice. I needed a smile today. Sara K
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September 28, 2025 at 12:55 AM
Lovely poetry Sara, age does bring grace. Congratulations on having received poem of the day… Beryl
Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 4:33 AM
Why, thank you, Beryl for letting me know. I did not know it was on the POTD list. I appreciate your visit. Sara K
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September 26, 2025 at 4:55 PM
you've captured a beautiful, gracious picture for us, Sara K. The metphor is outstanding and one with which I can relate. This line resonated with me: Now time's gentle hands have lifted and set it ablaze Well penned, faving, hugs & blessings, Sara B
Kendrick Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 4:55 AM
I am delighted you liked it, Sara B. I am honored you would fav it. Thanks for the blessings which I need. Sara K
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September 26, 2025 at 10:10 AM
Sara, "Age Gives Grace" I can see it just as you've described, hinges and all. You see it so well that I believe. -Richard
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September 26, 2025 at 11:51 AM
I'm right in the smack dab middle of old age slowly getting to the top of the hill and heaven only know what will happen when I get to the very top and hit the other side. How fast I go God only knows. Thank you, Richard, for the nice review of my work and the encouragement it brought. Sara K
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