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Age Doesn'T Matter When You'Re In Love

Susie teetered into Bill’s office, wearing a skintight miniskirt Sat on Bill’s knee for dictation. She was an outrageous flirt Soon Bill was smitten and couldn’t resist her ample charms He forgot about his wife and kids and fell into Susie's arms That was the lusty beginning of their clandestine love affair Young Susie is a man-eater and calls Bill her "Honey Bear" Bill’s wife discovered his deception and asked for a divorce She’ll keep it out of the media for a huge settlement, of course! As soon as his divorce was finalised he made Susie his wife Susie’s only twenty. Bill wanted a carer for the rest of his life Bill’s eighty-five years old and Susie stroked his thinning hair and denies her attraction to him is that Bill’s a multi millionaire! They say age doesn’t matter, especially when you are ‘in love’ That depends if you’re the ‘secretary’ who's married to ‘the ‘guv’! Within a year Bill was dead and Susie worked for another VIP I've heard she takes dictation while sitting naughtily upon his knee Age doesn’t matter when you’re in love Contest Sponsored by Julie leigh Rodeheaver 12-16-17
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Roper Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 9:45 PM
Jan, congratulations on your win!
Allison Avatar
December 19, 2017 at 4:20 AM
Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs jan xx
Tripp Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 8:04 PM
Congratulations!
Allison Avatar
December 19, 2017 at 4:20 AM
Thanks Rhoda:-) hugs Jan xx
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 1:07 PM
Oh this hits home!! Lol :) my mum's third husband left her for a girl in the office my age (20s at the time) and his name was Bill ;p Cheers my dear! xomo <3
Allison Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 3:43 PM
oh heck Mo I'm sorry you can relate to this for real it was just a fun fiction write for me but i do know these things happen:-( hugs jan xx
Y. Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 12:37 PM
Hi Jan, I told you it was a winner. Congrats on your win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Allison Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 3:43 PM
Thanks Alexis I am delighted to be on the list:-) hugs jan xx
Bose Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 8:40 AM
Jan, I'm so jealous you so easily bring smiles to faces everywhere. A precious talent you have. I especially admire the stories you tell, like this, using rhythm and rhyme ... such entertainment. Nice, always. Dave
Allison Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 8:59 AM
Aww thanks David I just try and write to amuse people although I do surprise with the occasional more serious poem:-) hugs jan xx
Downing  Avatar
December 17, 2017 at 6:39 PM
Oh how funny and I sure had a great time reading his. Awesome job, I really like it a lot. A win for me :)
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2017 at 7:14 PM
Thanks Akkina:-) hugs jan xx
Michael Avatar
December 17, 2017 at 8:00 AM
Bill had another turn to bat before being bowled out...Well, the fortunate one is still young...and appears from the poem to be on a highway of fun...Enjoyed it...All the best Jan
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2017 at 1:55 PM
Pure fiction in my life but I know it does happen Arturo:-) hugs jan xx
Thirtyseven Avatar
December 17, 2017 at 6:35 AM
Poor old Bill. I like how you mentioned that he wanted a career for the rest of his life, I suppose he got more than one want.
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2017 at 1:54 PM
He sure did Scott!:-) hugs Jan xx
Gondolf Avatar
December 17, 2017 at 5:35 AM
This is a winner in my book, Jan, and judging from the other comments I think most agree. I enjoyed your poem this morning. John
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2017 at 1:53 PM
Thanks John sometimes humour works in contests sometimes it doesn't but I am delighted with the comments I've received:-) hugs jan xx
Lane Avatar
December 17, 2017 at 4:46 AM
Suzie is a doozie of a hussy. This poem is so indicative of your humorous style, Jan. Winner on the list or not, it's a winner to all those that you make smile.
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2017 at 1:41 PM
The aim was to make folks smile and from the comments I've had the poem has achieved that! Thanks for dropping by Lin:-) hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 8:07 PM
OH this is GOOD good good!!!! (my thoughts exactly on this extreme difference of age!)
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2017 at 2:39 AM
Glad you enjoyed Andrea lol and I love the pic hee hee , not sure if the sponsor will like it though but I write inspired by the contest theme and can't control my muse:-) hugs jan xx
Bauer Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 6:28 PM
ha! very funny, jan! sounds like a contest winner to me...
Allison Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 6:31 PM
I'm not sure if the sponsor will like it Ilene but I can never get my muse to be totally serious and she has only just returned to me recently lol:-) hugs jan xx
Hoffman Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 6:20 PM
A humorous example of a gold digger cleverly depicted~Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
Allison Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 6:27 PM
Thanks Che:-) hugs jan xx
Andresen Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 2:23 PM
- I think there are many like Susie ... everything for "the smell of loving money" :) - Love it, Jan :) - Luck in the contest - hugs and lovely weekend // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 5:17 PM
There are many like it Anne Lise:-( hugs Jan xx
Anish Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 2:05 PM
Sounds like the late Anna Nicole Smith! Enjoyable read here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Allison Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 5:17 PM
Oh yes that is a great example Matthew!!!:-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 12:22 PM
Don't know if old Suz could survive a sexual harassment charge lately, great write Jan, best wishes in the contest...
Allison Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 12:28 PM
Lol Charlie I expect she is rich enough never to have to work again and now maybe can afford a longer skirt lol!:-) hugs jan xx
Y. Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 10:28 AM
Lol!Jan, I enjoyed your humorous take on the contest theme.Nice pic too. I should have known you would have fun with this one. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Allison Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 12:01 PM
I doubt it will place in the contest Alexis but if i makes folk smile that's the important thing:-) hugs Jan x
May Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 8:49 AM
You weave these stories humorously Jan..Gl in the contest
Allison Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 12:03 PM
I think we've all seen the scene young woman and an old fella with one foot in the grave and another on a banana skin - i doubt it will place in the contest but I had fun!:-) hugs jan xx
Tripp Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 8:14 AM
Lmao. Such a clever write! Good luck in the contest. I'm saying winner.
Allison Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 12:04 PM
I', not sure what the sponsor is after so if it doesn't place I understand but I had fun and made folks laugh and that is the main thing:-) hugs jan xx
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