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Age Doesn'T Matter When You'Re In Love

When two people are in love age shouldn’t matter, except when one of the couples is underage and the public will chatter. He was sixteen, I was ten. He would hold my hands and spin me round and round like a propeller on a helicopter. My head would get woozy, and butterflies tickled in the pit of my stomach. I was so wanted his attention. His eyes were on other girls his age. He was twenty-four, I had just turned eighteen. The man I had loved for six years finally noticed I was a woman. He held in his hands a small gift wrapped in gold ribbon. His gaze never left mine. My legs grew week and my stomach fluttered. As he held my face in his hands and said, “Happy Birthday." “I don’t want to lose you.” I uttered the words, “I love you.” With a gold ring on my finger and a promise I said, “I do!” Thirty-six years of marriage still passionately in love. Age Doesn't Matter When you’re In Love. 12/6/2017
Poetry Contest: Age Doesn't Matter When You're In Love Sponsored by: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver

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Date: 3/18/2018 10:21:00 AM
This poem attests to the truth of 'soulmates'....
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Date: 3/18/2018 10:21:00 AM
This poem attests to the truth of 'soulmates'....
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Date: 12/19/2017 2:42:00 PM
Such a beautiful heartfelt love story! Congrats on your win :) Best wishes!
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Date: 12/18/2017 10:37:00 PM
So nice to go through the poem. Congrats to win.Love.
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Date: 12/18/2017 10:02:00 PM
Returning with congrats Eve..well done!
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Date: 12/18/2017 8:01:00 PM
Congratulations, Eve!
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Date: 12/18/2017 1:37:00 PM
Hi Eve, What a beautiful love story that you have penned. Is it a true story? Congrats on your fine win. It was well deserved:-) Alexiw
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/18/2017 3:03:00 PM
Somewhat yes it is a true story when you're young you always fall in love with that older , intriguing , handsome man in which I did with a few ( puppy love ) but my husband is 7 years older than I and I always wonder if I was ten what ????? My dad's wife was 20 years older than him.( my dad has passed ) . Sooo :)
Date: 12/18/2017 8:19:00 AM
Eve, you had me with matter ... chatter! Fun beginning, then nice imagery brings a story to life. I hope it's based in reality. 36 years is a wonderful romance. Congratulations! Dave
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Date: 12/18/2017 8:04:00 AM
Girl, you really know how to intrigue a person concerning young love! Your poem is so deserving of the win in this contest.
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Date: 12/10/2017 10:41:00 PM
What a captivating write, Eve. My mother was ten years older than my father, so I can testify that age doesn't matter. Of course, she was in her thirties and he in his twenties, but still...the concept is the same. Hugs
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Date: 12/8/2017 1:36:00 PM
Now, this is one of the loveliest love stories I have ever come across, Eve! May you enjoy many more happy years together. Hugs // paul
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Date: 12/7/2017 9:00:00 AM
Yes, I saw that in the news. Wasnt it her soccer coach? It is strange, its like saying a 16 year old is too immature to fall in love with someone older.. It would be the same here if a boy was 17 and a girl 15... Sometimes common sense needs to prevail..
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/7/2017 11:31:00 AM
you are right, but if the parents push to prosecute then it goes before the judge.
Date: 12/7/2017 7:42:00 AM
I agree, it can hit you at anytime and sometimes forever... lovely poem Eve..
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/7/2017 8:44:00 AM
Thank you, Silent One, there was an incident that just happen this week where a school teacher in his early twenties run of with a 16 year old and of course they placed him in jail for it. the girls dad helped the teacher get the job at the school she was going to. the young lady looks like she is 18 + ... :'(
Date: 12/7/2017 6:49:00 AM
A beautiful love story Eve, Wonderful write..GL in the contest... soupmail
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/7/2017 8:45:00 AM
Thank you for the wonderful compliment and the good luck, Joseph. Hugs Eve
Date: 12/7/2017 6:48:00 AM
Quite a touching passionate story of beautiful love--a winning poem..well done, Eve!
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/7/2017 8:46:00 AM
Thank you for the wonderful compliment and the good luck, Vijay. Hugs Eve

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