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Against the Odds

There is a girl
In a world
Far away from here
Where no fear
Can ever be conceled.
Her irritations are followed by 
cathartic absolution
And even on the most stormy of 
nights,
She glistens in the invisible,
Shinning light.
Her heart; 
Can see no wrong
Her eyes; 
Brighter then the sun upon dawn
She is what they all strive to be
Perfectly catalized.
In the depth of the sea,
They chide and chastize
Every move she makes,
However she will never break
And time after every melancholy 
time
She astonishes even the 
unsurprised.
Her charismatic way,
Brings even the doomed back to 
life.
Against the odds,
she's shinning 
Even in the dark
While shes crying 
You cant miss her spark
Like superwoman
No one can hurt her now
She shines
Returning hope back to this desolite 
town.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/7/2012 1:02:00 PM
Heartiest congratulayions Sarah on your your well deserved feature. Your writings are superb. -Mohammad
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Date: 10/5/2012 1:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poetry Sarah. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2012 10:20:00 AM
These are marvellous thoughts of hope. Keep on with such a good work. I loved it a lot! Love, Hanitra
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Date: 10/1/2012 7:30:00 PM
I like this poem very much. It is uplifting. warm thoughts, Ralph
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Date: 9/22/2012 4:09:00 PM
This is an amazing poem. I really enjoyed reading it. looking forward to reading more of your poems.
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