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Against the Moon - Sexyku For Contest

through bathroom windows
 moon reveals two silhouettes
entering water



A sexy sensual sexyku for Richard's Contest.

2/20/2017

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Maria Williams

March 14, 2017 at 10:24 PM

You've created such a lovely picture in this scene Charmaine.

Deborah Burch

March 8, 2017 at 2:52 PM

This made me chuckle!! :) well done Charmaine!! Oh and congratulations too!! Big Hugggs and love. deb

Debbie Duncan

March 3, 2017 at 3:20 PM

Love the haiku :)

Eve Roper

February 23, 2017 at 11:23 PM

Very good :) a 7 and congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Alexis Y.

February 23, 2017 at 9:53 PM

Hi Charma, You are good at these kinds of writes and you do them well. Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich

February 23, 2017 at 5:53 PM

VEry nice one, Charma. Glad I took a look at this winner list to see your awesome KU!! Congrats to you

Paul Callus

February 23, 2017 at 9:51 AM

An excellent haiku comprising suggestive imagery, Charm. Congratulations on your lovely win. Regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux

February 23, 2017 at 9:08 AM

This is hot Charmaine, I was glad to see your name on the list.

Charmaine Chircop

February 23, 2017 at 11:55 AM

Thanks Rick..I have a soft spot for Haiku..So I was tempted to enter.Thanks dear friend.

Tobey Hill

February 22, 2017 at 2:34 PM

Rub a dub dub, slipping in the tub...TAH

Peter Dome

February 22, 2017 at 8:53 AM

great visua well done, Hope you win. Pete.

Darren White

February 21, 2017 at 10:24 PM

Lovely! And suggestive too :) Good luck in the contest.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

February 21, 2017 at 12:07 PM

Boy, you really know how to get a fella's temp to rise, among other things. Great short sexyku, Charmaine. The contest name roped me in to read this one. Glad I did. Put a pep in my step today. Appreciate that. Love always, dear.

Chris Green

February 21, 2017 at 6:26 AM

Softly sensual and definitely deserving of a deep “sigh” Charmaine. Good luck in the contest

John Lawless

February 20, 2017 at 7:48 PM

it is always difficult to be the one on the outside looking in.....especially if you get caught.....very intriguing entry Charmaine.

James Inman

February 20, 2017 at 5:55 PM

Very sexy indeed. Beautiful imagery.

Daniel Turner

February 20, 2017 at 5:37 PM

Very romantic, Charmaine:)

Lisa Ricci

February 20, 2017 at 5:01 PM

The format is in true form. Imagery is there. Best of luck with the contest.

CayCay Godwin

February 20, 2017 at 3:48 PM

Very nice! Great imagination. I have figured nothing out! I enjoyed your contest entry and wish you luck in all things ... CayCay

Jan Allison

February 20, 2017 at 3:19 PM

oooh err Charma very sensual ... they should get a blind lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

February 20, 2017 at 3:28 PM

Ha..First I was going to do a haiku about Moonlight filtering through blinds lol Light filters through blinds/revealing two silhouettes/ On bed become one...This was my last..before the one I posted..Was thinking of Hot Springs too and Oceanic Waters..and against rising moon...but at a point the bedroom blinds were there too ..Bt I have a poem with moon filtering through bedroom blinds..So guess it had to be Hot tub time ..lol :)