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Against Sunset, "they'Re" Captured

Heavenly skyline of orange and red Skeletal treeline in sporadic shred The line of the bright is turning to night In smile they grace us, nature's sight She shows her emotions, sometimes we don't see This lady all around us so pleases me Come the 14th of July, this year 2010 Carolyn, look to your skies, and you'll see the birds when They dip their wings as they fly past you A poet so wonderful, yes you, I mean you Enjoy your day into your sun setting night For these three winged gems, gliding smiling delight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/12/2010 11:22:00 AM
Congratulations James on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Heaven Sent Smiles". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2010 9:21:00 PM
Congrats on the 5th place win, Highlander
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Date: 7/11/2010 5:08:00 PM
A very sweet write for Carolyn. Congatulations, Highlander!
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Date: 7/11/2010 4:01:00 PM
Congradulations in the contest. Love, Destiny
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Date: 7/11/2010 3:28:00 PM
Congratulations, James on your poem's success in the contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/11/2010 3:16:00 PM
Gad to see you placing high with this great poem. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/11/2010 1:14:00 PM
Nice... another great tribute for Carolyn. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/11/2010 11:55:00 AM
You had me smiling big time, James. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/9/2010 5:27:00 PM
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Date: 7/9/2010 5:26:00 PM
Very nice. I think it should be a winner. I give it a 7 Love Joyce
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