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Against River Time

When, at reunions, classmates seem so much older than you, you feel triumphantly younger, from your own point of view. Don't you ever fool yourself, look into other mirrors; with less vain eyes, look closer for unaccounted errors. Refusal to see through vanity's insecurity, bloated but tightly tucked-in tummy, hyperacidity; eye bags, deeply-furrowed brows, fine, bluish veins and crow's feet; against the flow of River Time, there's nothing but defeat!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/12/2008 5:00:00 AM
This is so true, but just think, some can't look in a mirror, and then, take the aging with a smile, it is a part of living. Enjoy living, we are only here once, make someone happy, make someone laugh, love, and smile often...Always, Christy
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Romeo Naces
Date: 5/10/2019 2:28:00 AM
Thanks, Christy.
Date: 7/12/2008 2:19:00 AM
I liked the flow and message of this poem Time catches up with us all
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Date: 5/10/2019 2:29:00 AM
Thanks, Michael.

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