Against a Browning Hill

Against a browning hill 
oak trees' bleeding limbs are stretched; 
some drops release to softly fall 
some cling to dry encrusted scars.
A few short months and we will walk
beneath the springing trees
marking their swords of thinnest green 
stabbing at the stars.
And so, life seasons make their rounds 
in nature and in men 
the flower wilts, the rose is pruned, 
the leaves must fall again.

Everything of lasting worth 
contains a seed of loss;
on young love's throbbing circlet
hangs a bitter cross.
We will walk life's lanes together,
cherishing this pain we share
for spring will come tomorrow
and bloom on our despair.

Copyright, November 11, 2014
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Barden Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 2:47 AM
Congrats on your win, Faye - very well done, my friend ... blessings to you! :-)
Mccall Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 8:54 AM
Nicely done Faye, congratulations.
Smith Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 12:05 PM
Brilliant Faye, well worth honoring, congratulations...
Woodward Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 10:58 PM
Wow! Your imagery provoked a strong emotional reaction in me. I honestly felt autumn gather around my shoulders.
Gauthier Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 7:15 PM
What a delightfully pleasant poem. Congrats on your great win, Faye.
Scars Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 7:08 AM
beautiful poem sweet Faye :)-luloo
Carber Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 9:10 AM
Lovely, quite lovely! Congratulations on your much deserved win!
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January 15, 2018 at 8:45 AM
Beautifully evoked. Congrats on your win!
Helppi Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 5:32 PM
Very nice, and as Brenda already said, soothing, this poem soothes like the feeling after crying over a lovely sentiment. Very nice job Faye!
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November 11, 2014 at 4:43 PM
A beautiful poem Faye. It just reads so smoothly and soothing. I love it.
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