Afternoon Notes

I heard a black bird’s song today
He balanced high on a wire
His dark coat purple in reflection
His voice high and sweet
above the ocean’s roar and
the hum of traffic on the beachside highway 

So pleasant, melodic,
not unlike a tune to be stolen by the Mockingbird 
He called out so clear and soft
Was it a springtime love song?
A call for a mate only spoken at the end of winter?
Or had I never heard the delicate song
of a creature whose like surround me 
as I walk through the grass each day?

Hello, he cried
So far above me on that wire
in a moment we shared together 
as our lives intersected 
for just that instant
in a departing winter
and an awaking spring.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Beaufort Avatar
June 23, 2024 at 5:49 PM
Fran, this was a very pleasant read. Nice when birds interact with us!
Delaney Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 5:16 AM
A beautiful moment captured, Fran A rare moment like this stay with you forever.
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November 27, 2023 at 8:00 AM
As winter sets in here, the cold north, I miss the songs of birds who chirped at 5am sun. Your poem harkens back to spring's fresh, green days. I enjoyed reading your posting. Best wishes, Brian
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November 27, 2023 at 9:19 AM
Thank you, Brian! Warm wishes in the cold north!
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