Afternoon Hiatus

Afternoon Hiatus 

Counting footsteps at dapper dawn’s increased insistence
As flurries of minutes in perpetual movement binds hands
To a spinning roulette of prioritized importance
Motivating motives of revelations demand admittance
And attention’s effervescent energy 
Like the ordered notes in a music box rebellion
That winds down when solitary sol begins to slide
Past the apex of day’s light that tumbles
Toward the waiting, wandering, sea’s vertical vortex
In long beams touching yawning midafternoon
Begging the tattered taskmaster time
Sit down!  
Be still!
In china cups from time before
Savor the pearls of tawny topaz perfume 
Carried from exotic mountain slopes
Amber ambrosia steeped in afternoons long passed
To pause
Pushing back on the tempo of time’s insistent intervals -
To disconnect in soaring sighs
Of an afternoon holiday in hiatus.  

1-29-21
Contest: Hiatus
Sponsor Chantelle Anne Cooke
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Radhakrishna Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 12:33 AM
Congrats on your win and this brilliant poem! I could not bring myself to write anything on the subject but you have shown us how to do it! well done!
Kauffman Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 9:48 AM
Your words humble me, Krish. Thank you so very much! I have always loved "tea time" and it just seemed to be a good description of a hiatus. I hope in the future you are able to put done some musings. I so enjoy your poems. All the best!
Duggard Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 9:05 PM
Oh, your words are as smooth and refreshing as an early morning breeze! I truly hung on every line of this poem--if one could abstain from referring to it as the melodic outcry of suppressed desires-- yet cannot enunciate why. But perhaps I don't need to; perhaps it adds to the inherent, inescapable mystery of hiatus.
Wolf Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 8:26 PM
The way you wove the short lines in with the longer descriptive masterpieces really works for this reader. Wow! Congrats on your win in the contest too, Sam. Sweetness and Song, Gershon
Seeker Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 7:15 PM
“ Savor the pearls of tawny topaz perfume “ wow! Congrats Sam! Enjoyed the read :)
Kauffman Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 9:46 AM
Thank you so much Seeker! This was such a fun theme to explore and a good reminder to take a "hiatus" from the hectic daily chaos. Hope you are well and safe. Thanks for the smile :) So glad you enjoyed it!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 4:56 PM
Sam my friend, a treat it was for me to take this breather appreciating the interim of an approaching eve, my compliments truly, Aloha!
Kauffman Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 9:42 AM
A treat for me to take a little "hiatus" to read your uplifting message my friend! Thank you both for taking the time to read and send your gracious message. They always bring a little Hawaiian sunshine to my day. Blessings and Aloha!
Gaul Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 1:43 PM
Sam, you've taken alliteration to a lofty level. This afternoon interruption has a penetrating poetic tone. So nicely done. Yes, a simple thing but a thing well done nonetheless. Congratulations dear bard.
Kauffman Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 9:39 AM
Your wonderful words and visits truly leave me smiling my friend! Thank you for that gift. And for your so perceptive insights I am grateful. You are right - stopping for a few minutes in the afternoon is a simple thing but such an important time to refresh and renew. All the best my friend!
Goldsmith Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 9:34 AM
Congratulations on your win. "Wonderful" I think this afternoon, I will take a hiatus and have some tea and cookies. Have a blessed day with your win.................
Kauffman Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 10:24 AM
Thank you my friend. Let me know what time so I can virtually join you! Think I might bake some cookies. All the best blessings!
La France Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 8:20 AM
Sam, beautifully written and congratulations on your win in the contest _Constance
Kauffman Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 9:12 AM
Thank you so much Constance. I can just see you and Snuggles taking a hiatus on a winter afternoon with a cup of tea and a goodie! Hope things are calmer! Sending you the blessings.
Canerdy Avatar
February 17, 2021 at 8:37 PM
Vividly descriptive, appealing piece, Sam. Janice
Kauffman Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 9:09 AM
Thank you so much Janice! I'm so glad the picture in my mind came through the lines. Thanks for taking a "hiatus" with a cup of tea with me. All the best.
Kendrick Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 1:39 PM
I like the alliteration throughout this one. I see you entered it in the contest. I will keep in touch. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Kauffman Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 9:07 AM
Thank Sara and you are most welcome! This was such fun to write and play with the alliteration it inspired. Hope you are doing well. Sending you many blessings
Ray Choudhury Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 4:32 PM
Love the way the free verse moves, flows, without hindrance! A very special poem, Sam, on a very special theme. Love ~ Mala
Kauffman Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 9:05 AM
Hi Mala! I love your messages. They are so perceptive and I learn something from each of them! Thank you for taking a "hiatus" to read and respond in your very special way. So glad you liked this - sending you my gratitude and blessings. Much love.
Brul Avatar
February 13, 2021 at 10:11 AM
This is so lovely Sam...A splendid poem is born when artist's fingers continue to move even when the music stops...
Kauffman Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 9:01 AM
Thank you so much JCB! I love your comment. I think there is a poem in there somewhere! Here's to the perpetual music of life especially when we listen! All the best my friend.
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