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Aftermath of the Storm

Aftermath Of The Storm i was keeping watch over the loveliness of my flowers three in a row until the imposition of falling logs unnecessarily brawn nature’s jocularity unbecoming of oak my diurnal attention disturbed by ash yet one ruddy plant lipstick smeared a sunshine smile shoulders steady my calla lily penetrated by careless flotsam Verbena deeply impacted her flowers have passed no medics just me as casualty branches pile up and the chainsaw chopper roars 7/2/2018

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Date: 7/3/2018 7:50:00 AM
Kim.. you paint a post-storm battlefield in your garden. I like it!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/3/2018 2:33:00 PM
Thank you, Lyric!
Date: 7/3/2018 4:55:00 AM
I like how you sneaked up on us with a chain saw at the end after starting us out with delicate flowers, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/3/2018 5:33:00 AM
Thank you, Caren
Date: 7/2/2018 9:39:00 PM
Have seen that happen Kim, gardens destroyed by natural events storms etc, what's upsetting is the love and care and time you spend in making your garden look nice. Nature can be cruel at times. Tom.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2018 10:41:00 PM
For sure! Thanks, Tom!

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