Aftermath of Oz

The rubiest shoes, on display,
walked yellowest bricks all the way.
The emerald glows,
but Dorothy knows
the rainbow hues melting away.

A barrel of laughs in the night.
Ho hum after witchiest flight.
The bump on her head
does find her in bed.
The monkeys with wings out of sight.

The brains of a scarecrow she sees.
The heart of a tinman does freeze.
It does not make sense.
Her friends think she’s dense.
Yet, courage of lion, she frees.

She roars about witches on brooms
and colorful wizard that booms;
and munchkins not high,
and monkeys that fly.
A quack of a doctor resumes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Messina Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 11:26 AM
Kim, so witty and cute. Congratulations on your winning placement in my contest. Thanks for entering I enjoyed reading this. Merry Christmas to you and your family. :) Hugs Charlie
Rodrigues Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 1:02 PM
I am thrilled that you liked this! Thank you, Charlie, and Merry Christmas!
Daniel Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 7:34 AM
This is cool, Kim:)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 2:18 PM
Thank you! :)
Bagchi Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 6:54 PM
Great! Cheers! RB
Rodrigues Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 2:19 PM
Thanks, Rajat!
Hind Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 3:25 PM
LOL I hope I'm supposed to be laughing...your work was genius
Rodrigues Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 2:20 PM
Thanks! Yes, I hope you are laughing! That makes me happy!
Flood Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 3:19 PM
Nice one, Kim. I’ve written something in a similar vein… alas I could barely remember the ‘supporting cast’ (ie flying monkeys) so I worked with what I had. I certainly see a podium place with your name on it. Good luck. Terry
Rodrigues Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 2:20 PM
Perhaps! I thank you, Terry!
Andresen Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 10:54 AM
- I bow in the dust ... excellent, Kim :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 2:21 PM
Wow…get up and dust off the green and yellow glitz! I so appreciate you, sweet one!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 10:19 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative/fun write about OZ. Great Write.... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a fun day as you write away..................
Rodrigues Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 2:21 PM
Oz is so embedded in my thoughts! Thank you!
Read Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 10:16 AM
Lovely limericks Kim enjoyed reading them. Xx
Rodrigues Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 2:22 PM
Thanks so much, John!
Buhagiar Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 10:12 AM
Wow, how I loved your limericks. Best for a win, my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 2:22 PM
Hugs, Victor! Keep writing!
Buhagiar Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 5:49 AM
At least I hope you liked them.
Cunningham Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 5:03 AM
Brilliant limericks Kim, you rose well to the challenge. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 2:23 PM
Thank you so much! Your ring-a-ding-ding limerick will surely be at the top of the leader board!
Rolland Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 11:16 PM
the poem match perfectly with the movie, i think, so creative is the wizard of Oz, thanks poet Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 2:24 PM
Thank you, Yann! We’d watch every year (today I suppose you could watch every day, but that leaves no anticipation).
Wolf Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 8:52 PM
This is superb, methinks, Kim... But did you have to ruin my all-time favorite colorized movie? lol... Now don't start up with the tooth fairy on me! Keep smiling, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 2:49 PM
Kansas was colorless…lol! Sorry… Thanks, my wonderful friend!
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November 18, 2024 at 8:26 PM
Great limericks on the Aftermzth of Oz Kim, enjoyed the read… Beryl
Rodrigues Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 2:50 PM
Thanks, Beryl!
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