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April 21, 2024
After the Floods Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Anoucheka Gangabissoon


 

Damaging winds whip and slash, whirling wild, drenching rain, Roads decimated come to standstill, as gushing floods reign, Inundating swollen terrains, roiling deluge of a tenebrous day, As trees bowing to gusting storms; erratically waltz and sway. Houses naked with roofs blown, now ache, mangled and worn, Where loss of life, in makeshift shelter, neighbors sadly mourn; Sharing stories of a sudden event, rushing through the town, Disheartened life, since torn-down, anguishing in wistful frown. Danger lurks, where flood waters submerge fallen power lines, As rivers and tributaries of muddy-flows, float uprooted vines, What once was a harmonic rhythm, now perturbs pulse of life, Dawn that rose on a lambent arc, now shudders in sullen strife. People stranded, anxious for rescue, assess the damage done, Cars are destroyed, fires are burning, recovery has just begun; Sirens blaring of dire emergencies, are chasing to plug gas-leaks, Searching for victims of drowning, scouting the rivers and creeks. Swindlers are hovering, ripping-off elderly, exacting heavy price, Hit by the tragedy first, then by the cruelty of defrauding vice; Some now blame callous humanity, some name it~ an act of fate, Mired in untold challenges, as remnants-torrent start to abate.

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Date: 4/30/2024 10:43:00 AM
We live in an area with rivers and drainage systems that can be overwhelmed by big storms. So we've seen a lot of flooding in low-lying areas recently. Not fires, but just floods. It doesn't pay to live at the bottom of a valley or where the flow from above heads in your direction without diversion. Down-sloping driveways are also something to avoid. People can take precautions and install pumps, but sometimes they don't work.
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Date: 4/27/2024 9:52:00 PM
Vijay, your brilliant portrayal, truly brought the scene of devastation to life, in all its power and fury! Awesome imagery! :)
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Date: 4/27/2024 4:31:00 AM
I read about the Johnstown flood in Pennsylvania! Those that come on suddenly, this one from a broken dam, are indeed devastating. Indeed, more than water, oft fire and swindlers too. …sirens blaring…gas leaks…all the things of horror. I think you will be high on the winners list! Blessings ~ Kim
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Date: 4/24/2024 10:33:00 PM
I feel like you have lived this because it feels so real. I have never real understanding of how damaging a flood is so this was a hard challenge for me!
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Date: 4/24/2024 12:45:00 PM
Dear Vijay, you have skilfully captured the devastation and its impact that a flood causes. This is so vivid and descriptive that the reader feels a part of the scene,’ What once was a harmonic rhythm’’ dawn that rose on a lambert arc’. It’s a powerful read and poignant too. Good luck in the contest. I’m sure it will place highly dear Vijay. Hugs and blessings x
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Date: 4/24/2024 10:20:00 AM
Your poem is a poignant portrayal of the devastation wrought by a fierce storm, with its vivid imagery and emotive language bringing to life the harrowing scenes of destruction and despair... Best of luck in the contest..
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Date: 4/24/2024 8:23:00 AM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. I see areas flooding or flooded on TV and wonder how in the world people make it through, then how do they deal with the clean-up and rebuilding. We had damage once from flooding, well thrice, and the clean-up was not easy. We live on a hillside but water flows to our home which is a problem even with retaining walls. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 4/23/2024 5:27:00 AM
You describe the aftermath of a flood well, best wishes in the contest
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Date: 4/23/2024 2:47:00 AM
For once, at least from those I've read this is not on Noah's ark. You describe the aftermath of flooding so common in many cities, especially in the UK. Brilliant write. Emotion is rife and I've seen people crying at loss of houses. Best for a win.
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Date: 4/23/2024 2:21:00 AM
Youv written a brilliant take on this prompt, so well woven about the aftermath of such a natural disaster, i love the way youv especially written “ People stranded, anxious for rescue, assess the damage done, Cars are destroyed, fires are burning, recovery has just begun; Sirens blaring of dire emergencies, are chasing to plug gas-leaks,” so powerful and descriptive and as i read especially those lines i can feel the panic and angst of those affected by floods, its so challenging and difficult, youv described that so well here! Very well done! And delivered! Pleasure always reading! Best wishes for the contest. Fave it is
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Date: 4/21/2024 7:52:00 PM
Vijay, you have brilliantly addressed the many aspects of storms~~not just Nature's role. Janice
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Date: 4/21/2024 6:38:00 PM
Rain becomes a soft melody embracing the heart, as it falls gently. However, when the wind is wild and our earth is overflowing with water, it's a very dangerous situation; indeed. When this happens, I'm always thinking of those in need. This is emotional and tender, all at the same time. My best to you, Vijay. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 4/21/2024 5:27:00 PM
Outstanding write, Vijay! The cadence of your poem and its rhyme scheme made your poem easy to read. Your imagery and descriptive lines helped me to live the flooding experience with you. I especially liked these lines: What once was a harmonic rhythm, now perturbs pulse of life, Dawn that rose on a lambent arc, now shudders in sullen strife. What can I say. Your poem was perfect & will place well in the contest! Wishing you a pleasant evening. Sara
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Date: 4/21/2024 11:06:00 AM
such a vivid description of the devastation cause by the floods and the final stanza hits home so hard:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/21/2024 8:45:00 AM
Have only seen it on the news, the devastation it brings. You captured it well Vijay, it was like you were there reporting from the scene. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 4/21/2024 8:41:00 AM
You wrote a wonderful poem, my friend Vijay, on the devastation and aftermath of a natural catastrophe, namely a devastating storm and floods. In its aftermath, it delves into the anarchy, destruction, and human misery that ensue. Damage to houses, infrastructure, and lives as a result of strong winds, torrential rainfall, and flooding are all depicted in this poem. Also discussed are overcoming adversity, grieving a loss, finding solace in one's community, and taking advantage of vulnerable situations. "Whip," "slash," "drenching," "inundating," and "roiling" are words that conjure images of mayhem and disorder. "Trees bowing," "houses naked," and "swollen terrains" are all metaphors for the devastation that the storm delivered.
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Date: 4/21/2024 5:08:00 AM
You should have been a reporter journalist dear Vijay, your words exact and so precise, love that you can write poetry in both styles, poetic and reporter, nice job Vijay
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