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Aftermath of An Auto Mishap

Isn’t it terrible how some people drive? Thank God I can walk away from this and stay alive. This awful episode has left me more than annoyed. The car is considered totaled now that the air bag is deployed. As usual, the police and paramedics arrive. They extract a body from my car that is no longer alive. I tell them I’m relieved that they are here. However, my voice is something they don’t hear. The deceased has an appearance I recognize. That dead man is me! I don’t believe my eyes! Wait a minute, what is this I see? What I am seeing now defies believability: Angels descending, bring from above, echoes of mercy, whispers of love. They flock all around me, and take me by the hand. These are strange surroundings I don’t understand. One of the angels tells me it is time to go. I reply, “Where are we going, I would really like to know?”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/8/2012 1:21:00 PM
Love this clever imaginative piece, Robert - a sure winner if for a contest
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Date: 2/8/2012 12:33:00 PM
Wow very descriptive here Robert glad they sent you back again xx Thanks for you r lovely comments, still laughinh over the Black and Decker one x
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Date: 2/8/2012 11:18:00 AM
Wow, the way you describe the spirit emerging from the lifeless body reminded me of the movie "Ghost," Robert. And because you have a kind heart, you will find that angelic escort when your time comes. Very creative and the story behind the poem is gripping! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/8/2012 11:28:00 AM
Smile ˜ "Jesus Christ Himself * Is, Going To Be Escorting Myself Come That, Beautiful Day!" *
Date: 2/8/2012 11:12:00 AM
Smile ˜ Makes Myself Consider Thousands Of Years Ago When The Fallon Angels Rebelled * I Don't Think That They Had All Of Their Calculations & Bearing Correct & Definitely Did Not Know That Yessss, They Were Heading Into A Major Collision With Stupidity * Hahahaha ˜ Owwww Well, Live & Learn Right ˜ Love, John!:) *
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