Aftermath

The first touch of night
Marks the eastern horizon
I've spent the whole day
Trying not to remember
The skill of your deception
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
November 24, 2011 at 11:20 AM
wow, this is really Cool, JIM!!!
Delacroix Avatar
November 20, 2011 at 7:48 PM
Oh ouch! Well done! Nicely written, making the right effect of emotion with a few words in this well written Tanka. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Caroline.
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