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Afterglow Fades

We dance the same old dances but we're wearing diff'rent shoes long and lingering habits are the hardest ones to lose decisions left to me are choices I can't bear to choose when echoes from inside of me are someone else's news. The flames of passion quickly rise, and quickly they descend A poet's life in empty pages and a broken pen I'm scarred forever from the wound you caused that just won't mend I hide deep down inside the ship of tears I cannot rend. The ticking clock of Chronos passes time as I move on in measured differences the distance half takes twice as long still I sing the lonely notes off key to fav'rite songs remembering the warmth to which my lonely heart belonged. What can I do when my dreams come true, but aren't like I planned, what have I done to lose the one that I held in my hand ?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/15/2013 1:21:00 AM
This is simply awesome,,, a fave for sure ;}
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Curt Mongold
Date: 1/15/2013 12:40:00 PM
Thank you Debbie, I truly appreciate your kindest of comments. Always, Curt
Date: 1/8/2013 8:00:00 PM
I really love the second line in the second stanza. To me it really reflects poetic tragedy in the most powerful sense for a writer.
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Date: 2/8/2010 7:16:00 PM
Thank you.
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Date: 2/8/2010 4:26:00 PM
If I am reading this right, the writer should be happy but isn't, and doesn't really know why. I agree with Michael, the emotional content is strong. The rhythm is smooth. A good read....Thank you for your kind comments today...Margaret
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Date: 2/8/2010 4:00:00 PM
I am so happy your poetry was amongst the poetry I am reading today Curt. May you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2010 3:47:00 PM
Ok, i do like this, it rymes and it has emotional expression. 5 points
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