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the foreplay and afterglow isforgotten in the show of virility and might so she cries into the night She's uncherished and unsought All his tenderness forgot In the rush of passion's need Fantasies remain....unfreed She remembers yesteryear When he clasped her, held her dear Now she's just a bedded form Lost in her desire's storm With a sigh her closes eyes dreams her dreams of paradise where her love she celebrates and her wants she consummates Where she smiles in wanton bliss as she's bathed in lover's kiss in a place where fertile mind intercourse with body finds where foreplay and afterglow build up to climactic show and love pounds with wondrous might leaving joyous tears in sight Eileen This is the case for many in long term relationships. Relationships should be nurtured for the flame to burn bright.

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Date: 11/28/2015 3:13:00 PM
Though the fires don't burn quite as hot, the coals still glow with a deep penetrating heat and once stoked spring to life! Love this poem LO!! Smoking hot in Texas!
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Date: 11/13/2015 11:02:00 PM
Very nice write , 7 for sure. Thanks for coming to read my words on insomnia . Yes it did help :) Wandering Mind !
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/13/2015 11:29:00 PM
Thanks for the visit, my dear. :) Glad you eventually got to sleep. Hugs
Date: 11/12/2015 3:23:00 PM
I heard say that the Chinese love rice meals because they manage to have a new recipe for each day of the year! Perhaps that's the way we could look at love, thus keeping it fresh, alive and desirable. A delightful poem, Eileen. Hugs // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/14/2015 4:00:00 PM
...with pleasure:)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/13/2015 11:30:00 PM
Promise me that you will pass by the hotel to see me when I am in Malta, Paul. I'll email you, dear. Appassionata would love to see you. Hugs
Date: 11/12/2015 1:09:00 AM
This poem speaks the truth. Intercourse can become a boring ritual if not nurtured with fresh ideas,new adventures and. if one wont rekindle the flame of desire and love. Much truth here.
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Date: 11/9/2015 12:28:00 AM
I can so feel the passion, just back from France and great to be here again reading such passion! oh la la!!
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Date: 11/8/2015 1:48:00 PM
This can be true but certainly doesn't have to be. Attention and intimacy mixed with love and imagination will keep the fire burning. Being brave enough to sometimes be selfish can also add some spark. Tell your partner what you need and ask her what she wants. I enjoyed this thought provoking piece ooh la la!
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Date: 11/7/2015 6:47:00 PM
Once the flame of passion is lit it should be maintained for to keep burning! One way to do it is love, true love, when everything one does is for the other and not for one's self! Beautiful rhythm and message, dear Eileen! A seven!
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Date: 11/7/2015 6:06:00 PM
Truthfully spoken Eileen. Beautifully written.
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Date: 11/7/2015 4:25:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, dear Eileen - I wish you a nice Saturday night - (I not so much on soup .... lately ........ lost a bit of sparkle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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