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Afterglow

In the afterglow
Her head upon my shoulder
Hearts beating as one

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Kelly Deschler

May 14, 2014 at 8:11 PM

There is such passion expressed here in so few words. This is a beautiful poem, Mark!

Mark J. Halliday

May 14, 2014 at 9:34 PM

Thank you. Passion at any age is supposedly a characteristic of us Libras (not that I pay any serious attention to astro.).

Roy Jerden

May 14, 2014 at 7:50 PM

Excellent imagery!

Mark J. Halliday

May 14, 2014 at 9:32 PM

Thank you, however the actual inspiration was in the dark.

Casarah Nance

May 14, 2014 at 7:10 PM

Aww sqwishy i hope that wasn't at 5:47 am... :-P

Mark J. Halliday

May 14, 2014 at 9:31 PM

Actually it was that night, just before submitting the haiku.

Poet Destroyer A

May 14, 2014 at 11:14 AM

Hello Mark, I love the flow and afterglow, once the heart beats as one... such a lovely sweet haiku...Linda

Mark J. Halliday

May 14, 2014 at 6:01 PM

Thank you. I literally made that up just after fooling around with my wife. You were about the first person to compliment one of my pieces when I first signed on. Thanks for the support.