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Afterglow

In the afterglow
Her head upon my shoulder
Hearts beating as one

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/14/2014 8:11:00 PM
There is such passion expressed here in so few words. This is a beautiful poem, Mark!
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/14/2014 9:34:00 PM
Thank you. Passion at any age is supposedly a characteristic of us Libras (not that I pay any serious attention to astro.).
Date: 5/14/2014 7:50:00 PM
Excellent imagery!
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/14/2014 9:32:00 PM
Thank you, however the actual inspiration was in the dark.
Date: 5/14/2014 7:10:00 PM
Aww sqwishy i hope that wasn't at 5:47 am... :-P
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/14/2014 9:31:00 PM
Actually it was that night, just before submitting the haiku.
Date: 5/14/2014 11:14:00 AM
Hello Mark, I love the flow and afterglow, once the heart beats as one... such a lovely sweet haiku...Linda
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/14/2014 6:01:00 PM
Thank you. I literally made that up just after fooling around with my wife. You were about the first person to compliment one of my pieces when I first signed on. Thanks for the support.
Date: 5/14/2014 5:04:00 AM
Mark very good image...David
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Date: 5/14/2014 9:43:00 AM
Glad you liked it. There's nothing quite like those few euphoric moments after intimacy, holding close someone you love. Thanks for commenting.