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After We Met

take a long hard look before i become the history in your history book it is full of irony you have ten minutes before i become inebriated and my head falls to pieces you should have just waited slowly i feel alive your fingers circling mine i'd love to survive im getting closer over time even when the snow falls gently i cant remove it fast enough you whisper breathlessly i feel an avalanche

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/2/2016 12:39:00 AM
Natalie Boals, epic ending. LINDA
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Date: 8/15/2015 1:29:00 AM
Natanlie, I like this very much SKAT
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Date: 10/8/2010 12:55:00 PM
nice rhyme Natalie. Welcome to the soup
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Date: 10/8/2010 10:55:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Natalie. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/7/2010 7:54:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your poetry tonight.. hope u check out the many contests soup site offers its members ..good luck with luv...
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