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After the Visit

My grandkids paid a visit To our country house last week And filled the house with joy Which emanated from each shriek. I dragged out all the books and games From when their dad was young And played the old cassette tapes With the songs that Raffi'd sung. The pillows from the couch made roads; The dominoes made towers. The dollhouse rooms were rearranged; The playing lasted hours. I'm back this weekend; they are not. I miss their laughs and smiles And all they left behind outside Are stones in little piles.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/4/2018 11:50:00 PM
… And you're not exhausted?! You ARE Super-Grandma! Three cheers for Ilene! :) gw
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Date: 9/2/2018 8:49:00 AM
Tugging the heart strings with this one Ilene, beautifully done :) xomo
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Date: 9/1/2018 10:22:00 PM
Very much understood, and well put. Save those precious memories for in a flash they're grown and gone!!....pat
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Date: 9/1/2018 5:01:00 PM
Precious moments Ilene that make you feel good. Tom
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Date: 9/1/2018 4:54:00 PM
AH, this is so sweet, and I know the feeling, when loved ones leave, children are such a joy!
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