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After the Storm

after the storm--
a clear starry sky
replaces my roof



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Lillie Williams

Date: 11/30/2012 1:19:00 PM

Good job, very good job!!!!!

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/11/2012 10:47:00 AM

strong image there...great haiku, enjoyed the read!

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/9/2012 12:00:00 PM

Reality show of the Nature after the storm. Wonderfully done with haiku. Thanks for your comment. Happy to meet again. Loved always, bl

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/8/2012 8:58:00 PM

Now THAT'S a sight to behold. 8( We dont get a lot of stars here--stupid smoggy los angeles...hermph... ;) Nice one though. Always, Laura

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/8/2012 9:52:00 AM

You can find beauty in the strangest ways! Keep 'em coming! Peace & Blessings Mattehw Anish

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2012 3:39:00 PM

again seeing this. FOr me it may be one of the very best in the contest.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/7/2012 12:44:00 PM

Oh! Hey, this gives me all sorts of mixed tho'ts...what a positive spin on having the roof blown off your home! Can u believe ANOTHER STORM is ready to hit the same US Eastern Seaboard AGAIN!? NUTS!! Nice to read your work, Kash! :)

Richard Palmer

Date: 11/7/2012 6:39:00 AM

have a wonderful night,lucky for you it's not raining lol,great write Kash

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/7/2012 5:53:00 AM

Ahh!!Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/7/2012 5:45:00 AM

yessss!... how visual with a startling ending, kashi... come over!..:) huggs!

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 11/6/2012 5:35:00 PM

LOL, you made me laugh, Kash. I know it's not funny but it's just too funny. Love you, my friend. Toquyen

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/6/2012 4:58:00 PM

this is wonderful, kash! really perfect!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2012 3:02:00 PM

excellent , Kash, simply stunning. you know, your ONE haiku puts to shame the little "series" i wrote but forgot to bring to school with me to post today. Only one of the five comes close to being a haiku, charles at his blog better not come after me, hahaha

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/6/2012 2:01:00 PM

Great haiku, Kash! Hope this is just fiction, though. Love, Kim

Kathryn Collins

Date: 11/6/2012 1:31:00 PM

talk about seeing silver linings. Hope you are okay.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/6/2012 1:18:00 PM

Kash, wow... with a sky like that why would you want to replace your roof... imagine the big bang theory being your roof every night... and do not worry about the rain, and cold breeze... Them days you come down to Texas.. LOL... I'm kidding... I hope you were not affected by the storms... always~pd

Tim Ryerson

Date: 11/6/2012 1:15:00 PM

Mercy me, Kash!...Did you get slammed by Sandy too?...Great haiku - Tim

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/6/2012 1:08:00 PM

This is a wonderfully written write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly wondrous and fantastic poem this afternoon! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!

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